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Oh, God. I knew it, I knew it, I knew it. And it happened just the way I had it all pictured in my mind. Erin, I almost could have written the scene...except of course you did it *so* much better than I could have. I kept telling Lois to delete that file, why didn't she listen to me? And here they were having such a marvelous date - your description of their feelings and experiences was wonderful. I'm crying now for both of them...  Kathy
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Realizing two people were staring at him in wide-eyed shock at the dog’s behavior, he quickly pretended the dog’s bite had hurt and reached over to rub his ankle. “Ow,” he exclaimed, hoping he sounded convincing. How are they going to work themselves out of this mess.... Can't wait to read the next part...soon!!!
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Oh my God! This is sad, sad, sad...  )
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NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Why, oh why didn't Lois'computer delete the story all by itself, like my computer sometimes? why didn't it crash like every well-mannered computer do, sooner or later? Or stalled? Or... *Sigh*  Simona  me stuffing my purse with fics-printed papers for tomorrow train-trip: this needs a more accurate reading
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Hi, Great part. 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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Ouchies!! that scene hurt. What a switch, Clark accusing Lois of lying and betraying his trust. Wow!  Can't wait to see how you plan to fix this! Well Done!  TEEEEEEEEJ
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Holy cow. Okay. Clark...you shouldn't have opened that file to begin with; it's not your computer! And Lois...why on *earth* didn't you delete it? I do believe her when she says that she was busy. But of course, Clark flew off the handle and...angst! Yay! Oh boy...how is this going to be fixed? RAFO RAFO...
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So you ripped out our hearts and just stomped all over it... after all that delightful date anticipation!
But it's all good! I mean - I definitely love that angst.
One thing - that image of Clark angry - scary. TJ - did you love it?
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“It’s a corporation I haven’t heard of before, but they seem legit; not a shell company this time. I was doing some research on them at home last night. I put the research I found into a file on my computer’s desktop. Take a look and tell me what you think.” gerry
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It was a matter of time he found out :rolleyes: Jose 
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Erin Yikes!!  Clark has to listen to what Lois is saying. Tricia 
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OY all this heartache, I can't take it any more.
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
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One thing - that image of Clark angry - scary. TJ - did you love it? HEEHEE! Leela, you know how to tag my buttons don't you? Yes, of course I loved that unnerving emotional tension that comes when I image his eyes darkly sparking with fiery anger, I just want to throw myself at his feet and beg for mercy in between kissing his ankles.  *Sigh* TEEEEEEEJ
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