Hi,
Great part.
"No - no - please - don't feel you have to leave because - " she faltered uncertainly. Why don't I want him to leave?
He looked at her closely.
"Do you *not* want me to leave?"
Her eyes flickered uneasily to his face, and then flickered away again. I don't know what I want.
"I ... I just don't know."
"Are you afraid to be alone? Has - has Luthor been bothering you again?"
"Oh - no - no - he hasn't.”
Why she didn't tell him the truth?
"Oh -that. Yeah. That. Well - let me try it..." She concentrated hard on screaming for help in his head, and saw him recoil in shock. Abruptly she stopped her broadcast, and immediately apologized.
"No - no - it's okay - but... whoa. That's just the freakiest thing," he said, unthinkingly, looking at her in stunned amazement.
His words stung. She wasn't a freak – just the victim of circumstance.
"You’re calling me a freak? Which one of us is the 'Strange visitor from another planet.?"
They are having to conversation at the same time. The verbal and the transmition of emotion opposite of what they are saying. :rolleyes:
Did you love her? Oh god. Don’t ask that. Don’t - shut up -just don't ask that question. "So you trusted her - her vision."
She sound little jealous.
I found that Lois after her experience, she giving biggest step than baby. She is less frighten.
More soon, please.
MAF
So I'll confine myself to "I love it, write more" 
