Hi,
Great part
"He was presumed dead, and I had reason to believe that Luthor was an imminent personal threat," her voice got serious and her expression darkened at the thought.
"Lois - what did he do?"
"He... he's been watching me. Stalking me. He had a complete replica of my apartment made - down to the very tiniest detail - in this creepy bunker of his - and he wanted me to live with him there, as his ... ugh - I can't even say it - as.. his-"
"Concubine," offered Perry.
She told them, but nobody remember the important to stop Luthor.
“Yea. It was. I won’t lie to you – it was a very painful time for me – when he confronted me like that – I really – at first – I was sure he was Kal – that he had somehow come back for me. I don’t know – I guess it doesn’t make sense, but I was so sure that Clark was dead, so it was the only answer that made sense.
It help I lot.
“Actually, I have been thinking about it – you know – Lana Lang?”
“Clark’s former fiancé.”
“Right. She’s a degreed psychologist.”
“But not practicing?”
Good idea but she should talk to Clark about it. He can convince Lana.
Later that afternoon, Lois opened her door to welcome Perry into her apartment.
"Perry - to what do I owe the pleasure of this visit?"
"I just wanted to talk to you about what happened between you and Clark."
If Luthor have Lois apartment bug, is very dangerous any conversation there. Is like giving him arms to use against them.
More soon, please.
MAF
My favorite bit had to be when Clark first smiled at Lois (in Perry's office) and she just had to smile back... that was a great moment. And I loved that she realized that, at least for that instant, he didn't resemble Kal at all. 
Much better to get someone who's already got some understanding of the problem.
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