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First off, Thanks to all the gentle readers who've stayed with this 'thing' as it continues to grow.
It's going to be a photo finish to see if I can get this finished before year's end.
Time hasn't exactly been a luxury lately, nor does it look to get better any time soon.
But enough of my problems. Your problem is to comment here.
Tank (who wonders if the gentle readers would just except a nice, abrupt Tank ending... mmmmm, maybe?)
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Hack from Nowheresville
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oooh I love the new developement with the clone pretending to be Clark, should be interesting. Keep writing Tank, this story deserves a proper ending. 
Avatar: Michael Clarke, awesome Aussie cricket player
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Pulitzer
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Oh wow intersting. But she will see throught the clone in an instant. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Kerth
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Loved the clone thoughts and the fact that he knows more about Mamba and Nigel  How is Lois going to react?  Jose 
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Top Banana
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Here's Lois' chance to try to turn the clone into their ally, if only she will use her femininity correctly...after all, all clones of Clark are programmed to love Lois!
Chris
"Together we are stronger than each of us is apart"
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Pulitzer
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Hi, Wow! Great part.  Clark definitely should stay with Lois. More ASAP, please. MAF 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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Pulitzer
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Great twist, Tank! I like where you are going. Let's bring down Nigel in a proper manner, eh?  Artemis 
History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod
Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis
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You know, this is a typical Tank story, where the central characters get into an impossibly tight spot and you can't figure out how they'll get out but they have to because he's in control and he doesn't really like Nigel or Mamba.
I've been thinking that Nigel is far more over-the-top than usual in this story, almost a little nuts, in fact. He's acting almost like Tempus, or Lex in his later appearances. Hmmm. Maybe Nigel is really Tempus in disguise? Naw, that's too twisted even for Tank!
This is a very good story and I hope you can keep the muse awake long enough to finish it.
Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around.
- Stephen King, from On Writing
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Columnist
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Hi Tank,
Sorry for not commenting more along the way. I just caught up with this story this morning (real life has been kicking my butt, too). Great little twist here with the clone and excellent writing, of course. I am sitting anxiously on the edge of my seat to see where you take this and how you resolve everything. Oh, and I'd really like to see Nigel get his butt kicked!
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Tank Excellent A-plot development! Tricia
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