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Hi, Great part. 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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I really liked this part! I love how he got mad and came right over to yell at her. I also love that they are so open about loving each other. I know Lois will love his parents. This is moving along nicely. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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The A-plot evolves  And the B-plot too!!  Expecting that visit to Smallville  Jose 
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Erin, I loved the way Lois reacted to Clark's anger - for me it showed that they are both very secure in their relationship. And, of course, I'm not going to object to smoochies especially when those are written in such a lovely way.  The A plot seems to be very complicated which I hope promises a lot more parts to this great story. Lois is starting to miss Perry? I'll take that as a good sign that Lois is subconsciously considering moving to Metropolis. I am curious to see what happens with Agnes and Princess though - they've both been very good friends to Lois as well as great characters. Looking forward to the next part, avia
"I get it, you're a ghost. You're dead. Big accomplishment, move on. You see a light anywhere? Go towards it okay?"
Cordelia in 'Rm w/a Vu' - Angel episode 1x05
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Loved it! 
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I loved it, Erin! Finally RL is taking a break, so I can to say how much I love your story! It's very positive they aren't worried to scare each other away if they have a little argument, and now their relationship has taken another step toward the right direction. I'm looking for the Smallville-moment: will Bureau 39 make an apparition? And what about the Lois-goes-working-for-the-Planet question? And is Agnes going to know her Lois' boyfriend? I'd like to know what she thinks about this new guy into her beloved neighbour'life! Simona 
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Erin This continues to be superbly written. Tricia 
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ERIN!!!!! When the next part? Simona
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Erin!! Were you kidnapped? ![[Linked Image]](http://www.cosgan.net/images/midi/konfus/e045.gif) Where are you???? ![[Linked Image]](http://www.cosgan.net/images/midi/konfus/g055.gif) I'm suffering crisis of abstinence!!!! ![[Linked Image]](http://www.cosgan.net/images/smilie/konfus/n045.gif) Help!!!  Next part, please, please, PLEASE!!! 
"My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell."
~ Superman: Man of Tomorrow #15
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Gasp! Going through...serious...withdrawl...  Please post soon! 
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Erin, are you all right there? We' like to see you posting again! Simona
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WOW! How wonderful to check back in here after a couple of weeks away and see people eager for the next part of my fic!  Thank you for telling me you are! I had to take a couple of weeks off during Christmas for a crazy RL, but I'm hoping to have the next installment ready in the next couple of days. Thanks for hanging in there, and for letting me know you were looking for it! You've made my week.
~~Erin
I often feel sorry for people who don't read good books; they are missing a chance to lead an extra life. ~ Scott Corbett ~
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You came back!!!! We're save!!!!  ), please!   ~ Andreia
"My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell."
~ Superman: Man of Tomorrow #15
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"A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." Chris Reeve
"Whatever comes our way, whatever battle we have raging inside us, we always have a choice. It's the choices that make us who we are, and we can always choose to do what's right." Peter Parker
DON'T DOUBT THE ROUTH
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/me whispers Erin where are you?!?! 
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Originally posted by IsisLnC: /me whispers Erin where are you?!?! I'm here! Finishing the next part right this second, if you must know. Thanks for the nagging! You've made my day.  I promise to post this quickly!
~~Erin
I often feel sorry for people who don't read good books; they are missing a chance to lead an extra life. ~ Scott Corbett ~
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Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!!!!
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Wow, I've just got caught up on this story and it's so good!! More soon, please!!
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Hurry please, pretty please with sugar and a cherry on top! 
