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And now no one can say I didn't keep my promises because here it is... you can send any and all stuff, well, here 
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“Well, it IS our wedding night,” Lois said, her tone suddenly seductive.
Lex had started to walk away, but stopped. He looked at her skeptically, although he seemed a little turned on at the same time… What? WHAT? 
"Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy
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The idiot Lex  I could almost feel sorry for him...nope, couldn't do it.  More please, and soon.
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Uh-oh... 
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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I'm beginning to understand the meaning of that saying that begins, "Be careful what you ask for..."!
Seriously, this part was excellent, but YOU'RE KILLING ME HERE!
First Lois, in a fit of guilt, takes off the sweatshirt, and Clark loses contact with her.
Then, Martha (Go, Martha!) brings back the shirt, and Clark is coming home, and all is well with the world, and what happens? Lex shows up! And Lois obviously has something up her sleeve, but how will Clark react if he "picks up" some of her conversation with Lex? AAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaarg!
- Vicki
"Hold on, my friends, to the Constitution and to the Republic for which it stands. Miracles do not cluster and what has happened once in 6,000 years, may not happen again. Hold on to the Constitution" - Daniel Webster
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What a ..hec* is going on?  I can´t believe it Ok, I am Mad and you are KILLING ME I have to go......anywhere...to scream  Karla
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Hi, Great part. 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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Hey everyone~ Thanks for the feedback.. :p sit tight, it will all make sense soon (that is, i hope it will, otherwise we're talking extensive rewriting!!  )... Part 10 to come soooooon!!!!
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Great story Nicole ), but I read every part and I'm very curious ro see where this is going to! Simona 
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Hi Nicole
"Work while you have the light. You are responsible for the talent that has been entrusted to you."
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Nicole A fantastic part! Tricia 
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thank you for all the encouragement!! Sorry I've been sidetracked, but I will post part 10 now!!
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