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FDK.REWRITE: Still Loving You - Part 5/5 (Final) #18990 12/24/04 01:03 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel OP Kerth
OP daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	He's spolied Nice ending Jose "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK.REWRITE: Still Loving You - Part 5/5 (Final) #18991 12/24/04 03:08 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,342 Likes: 1 Lost ethnica Top Banana
ethnica Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,342 Likes: 1 Lost	It made sense , the child of divorced parents will use the absent parent as a weapon if so allowed. And only Clark would see his loving Lois as the negative that pushed her away. Of course it wasn't his fault that she was all messed up but it's logical that he'd decide to shoulder part of the blame. Normally I wouldn't like his moving back in like that except this is L&C and they're gonna get back together , otherwise I'd say it would be hard on the child if they failed. It was a good story. I liked it. Hopefully someday you'll do a sequel to let us know how they ended up.

Re: FDK.REWRITE: Still Loving You - Part 5/5 (Final) #18992 12/24/04 01:02 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Beautiful story. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK.REWRITE: Still Loving You - Part 5/5 (Final) #18993 12/26/04 01:12 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Anna A lovely ending! I thoroughly enjoyed it. Tricia

Re: FDK.REWRITE: Still Loving You - Part 5/5 (Final) #18994 12/26/04 07:29 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 299 Finland, European Union Gabriele Hack from Nowheresville
Gabriele Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 299 Finland, European Union	I had my doubts earlier, but I was very satisfied with the way they solved the things between them: Quote “Of course! I asked you to marry me right after you found out that your fiancé was a criminal, when your life was upside down. How could I expect everything would be fine? You needed to find yourself first, and I didn’t realize it was a quest you had to go on alone. I should have given you some time to believe in love again. In the true love like the one I wanted to give you.” “I always believed in your love.” “You don’t now.” “But after all of this...” “See? I never gave you a chance to understand that you could do nothing that would kill my love for you.” “But... I disappointed you! I’m sure you never expected that you’d have to carry all the weight of our relationship on your shoulders!” “I was disappointed, but it wasn’t your fault. No one loved you like you deserved. No one but me. Which is why my love became a burden for you.” Only, if Jon hadn't supergenes, I would fear that he would grow fat. Gabriele

Re: FDK.REWRITE: Still Loving You - Part 5/5 (Final) #18995 12/29/04 01:42 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas A Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer
Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer A Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas	Thank you for the comments, FoLCs! See ya, AnnaBtG. What we've got here is failure to communicate...

Re: FDK.REWRITE: Still Loving You - Part 5/5 (Final) #18996 12/29/04 11:44 AM
Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 3,109 Likes: 41 Albuquerque, NM K KSaraSara Boards Chief Administrator Pulitzer
KSaraSara Boards Chief Administrator Pulitzer K Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 3,109 Likes: 41 Albuquerque, NM	Yeah... just call me bad BR! Sorry I haven't commented throughout like I'd planned, Anna. I've already told you but I just wanted to say it again. I'm really proud and wowed by how you took the original story and improved it so greatly!!!! (Not to mention how wonderfully in stride you handled the debate in the original fdk folders! ) You have a terrific command of the English language for it not being your native tongue (well even for a native speaker ) and I envy your linguistic range and abilities. You really created a great sense of angst and emotion in this story... two qualities that I adore when reading. And now... you have no excuse not to write introspection! I can't wait to see your next story!! Sara Kerth nominations are opening on March 3! 🏆2024 Kerth Award Posts 🏆. Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, the show, life, and more! You can also find me on Tumblr and AO3. Avatar by Carrie Rene

Re: FDK.REWRITE: Still Loving You - Part 5/5 (Final) #18997 01/04/05 11:51 AM
Joined: Oct 2004 Posts: 509 Mexico Karla Kent Columnist
Karla Kent Columnist Joined: Oct 2004 Posts: 509 Mexico	I really liked the end!!!! Well done!!! Karla My journal: http://charmingkarla.livejournal.com/

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