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Thanks to those who have stayed with this story as we near the ultimate end.

We are really getting down to the wire here. I really want to get this thing finished and posted before the end of the year. Unfortunately, work is rearing it's ugly head with some mandatory overtime coming up this monday and tuesday. I only hope I can manage to get some writing done today, and the middle of this week. Friday night is coming way too quickly.

Of course, once I finish this story I lose my computer.

Any comments on chapter 18 can be posted here. You don't even have to be nice.

Tank (who is looking forward to his year off from writing fanfic)

Tank, you are killing me here. I know you have to work but have pity!!! I want to see Nigel get his and I hope he gets it the way I think he will. More please.

BYW, when did you decide to let your WAFFY side out? I didn't know you had it in you.

Tank's a closet romantic at heart, as long as the woman he's romancing is Lois Lane! Yes, Tank, I have you completely figured out <g>

Yay! Superman the original is back!

(a year off from writing Fanfic~ don't you DARE~)

Hi,

Great part. That's her lucky charm.


For a moment I thought the clone was playing trick on her.

Tank

Another superb part!

Tricia

Now I'm really curious about how are you going to wrap this

Jose

Hi Tank,

I've enjoyed this story so far and am looking forward to seeing how you deal with Nigel St John and the clone.

I won't call the clone super. He has the powers, but he doesn't have Clark's inner strength or compassion and those are the things that made Clark super. Yet the clone was brainwashed from the beginning, so I suspect he never stood a chance.

It would be nice though if some of Clark's goodness finally seeped through the evil.

Hope you can finish this soon.

Yours Jenni