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Thank you, Pam! goofy

I've been wanting to get back into reading fic on the mbs again, but I couldn't handle the idea of trying to play catch-up. I needed something short and sweet to get started with, and you go ahead and post something as delightful as this! thumbsup

For the record, I twigged when she called him "Mr. Kent" rather than Superman. I read it after whatever tweaking you'd done so I've no idea about the additions or subtractions. smile You did miss a few past tenses, though: "He really looked miserable" rather than "looks" and "I think that shocked him" rather than "shocks."

Lovely piece, Pam! A great little "dimension rewrite" rather than ep rewrite, and extremely satisfying. smile

Hazel, happy to be FDKing again


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Hi,

Great story. clap


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Until she hears that the guy who wants her dead has died himself."

"Lex Luthor," Clark whispers.

I nod. "So then, she makes her way back to the States. Still using her fake identity."
eek How did Luthor die?


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He starts to smile. "Let me guess -- she uses her fake identity to get close to me, and ask me all sorts of questions to find out if I'm an obsessed lunatic or not."

"She figures if you are, she can go back to Europe. No harm done."

"But?"

"Well... maybe she finds out that she likes you." I give him a little smile. "And that she'd really like to go to dinner with you. Without any false pretenses."

He smiles back. "I think I like that theory. So... is she planning to take her old name back?"

"Not right away -- she has to write up her interview with Superman first. As an impartial outside journalist."
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Pam, these stories were great - I loved them! Waffy, snappy dialogue, and a kiss at the end!! smile

What's next on the agenda?

Vicki (who hopes to be back...someday...how is everyone?) help


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I loved it! It was great. I thought she was who she said she was right up to the end part about going out to dinner with him. Good story.

Is that a sequel I see on the boards? GTG read!
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I'm a bit late on FDK for this, but well, better late then never laugh

So. At first I had no idea it was alt-world. That cleared up once you mentioned
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He takes a deep breath. "She's a journalist who used to work
here at the Planet. She went missing in Africa four years ago,
and I'm trying to find her."
I had actually wondered if it was somewhere in the regular metropolis, with Clark being editor. The office was a real curve-ball. And who this Lyn-floozy having a crush on Lois' Superman?

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I make a snap decision. "But I don't want it to be part of an
interview, so let's wrap this up. What do you think happened to
Lois in Africa?"
Oh, that's this Lyn-floozy having a crush on her Superman :p Well, I was about 99% sure.

A great vignette, Pam. Loved it.

Michael


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