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FDK:Made to be Broken, 4/? #20580 04/07/05 01:05 PM
Joined: Oct 2004 Posts: 509 Mexico Karla Kent OP Columnist
OP Karla Kent Columnist Joined: Oct 2004 Posts: 509 Mexico	Poor Lois and Clark This story is so SAD But I want to read more :rolleyes: Karla My journal: http://charmingkarla.livejournal.com/

Re: FDK:Made to be Broken, 4/? #20581 04/07/05 01:26 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL Shadow Pulitzer
Shadow Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL	Good God, Sara! This story is KILLING me. You are the Mistress of Evil. Quote She didn't see his jaundiced eyes watching her every step, and she didn't see him darting a sharp glance at the glaring neon sign that displayed the time and destination of the next bus. She didn't see him. If she had seen him doing that, she might have gotten a little nervous. What is this business about?! He better darn well not be a spy! "Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy

Re: FDK:Made to be Broken, 4/? #20582 04/07/05 07:21 PM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 244 back home in good ol' Germany Sira Hack from Nowheresville
Sira Hack from Nowheresville Joined: May 2003 Posts: 244 back home in good ol' Germany	Great part! I'm so glad Lois figured out that an ATM card is BAD! Interesting twist for her to go to another part of the town to get the money. Like Shadow I hope that that guy who watched her so intently isn't a spy of the

Re: FDK:Made to be Broken, 4/? #20583 04/07/05 07:38 PM
Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 3,109 Likes: 41 Albuquerque, NM K KSaraSara Boards Chief Administrator Pulitzer
KSaraSara Boards Chief Administrator Pulitzer K Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 3,109 Likes: 41 Albuquerque, NM	Bad BR!! Bad! You know what I should be doing... I have something to read... so while you're busy torturing the masses, I'll be smug. Well... only a little smug, cause you're still causing me pain. whimper Just wanted to stop in and say a few things. Wonderful job with the ATM card! Great emotions as she realizes in terror what she almost did! Good job! Did I mention that Kenneth's date just kills me? Kills me. And that other thing I wanted to mention... I think Jen said it all: Quote Good God, Sara! This story is KILLING me. You are the Mistress of Evil. Ha! I'm an angel, you're the Mistress of Evil! Sara (the not at all evil one!) Kerth nominations are opening on March 3! 🏆2024 Kerth Award Posts 🏆. Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, the show, life, and more! You can also find me on Tumblr and AO3. Avatar by Carrie Rene

Re: FDK:Made to be Broken, 4/? #20584 04/08/05 01:26 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca... Wendymr Pulitzer
Wendymr Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca...	Still coming on nicely, Sara! Good to see that Lois is getting some of her old intelligence and native wit back. Is that conversation with Perry a flashback, by the way? It has to be, because it's clearly not taking place here and now. But aren't you putting all flashbacks in italics? (which you kind of need to do because it gets confusing otherwise ). Clark's not behaving very well, is he? It's not Emma's fault that she's not Lois. I can understand his misery, but still... he deserves a smack. But that flashback there - whoa! So he kissed Lois when she was just back from her honeymoon? Not good behaviour, Clark! Okay, this feels like it's going to be a very long story, so I'd better strap myself in for the ride... Wendy Just a fly-by! waves

Re: FDK:Made to be Broken, 4/? #20585 04/08/05 01:42 AM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 1,047 where the 7 hills and 3 rivers... CC Aiken Top Banana
CC Aiken Top Banana Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 1,047 where the 7 hills and 3 rivers...	Oh my gosh, Sara. This is just horribly, terribly, painfully wonderful. I love it and hate it. That date was a work of art. Am just green with envy over how you did that. Kenneth in his head, his date talking on and on... The despair just oozes off the screen. And in fact, it's all over my keyboard as I type. This won't be a quick, easy fix, will it? Kind of wish we could borrow Wendy's fates. Sigh. I'm in, I think. Unless this fic just kills me. CC You mean we're supposed to have lives? Oh crap! ~Tank

Re: FDK:Made to be Broken, 4/? #20586 04/08/05 11:37 AM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370 J Julia Beat Reporter
Julia Beat Reporter J Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370	OMG, this is SO good

Re: FDK:Made to be Broken, 4/? #20587 04/08/05 01:48 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ Supes1fan Top Banana
Supes1fan Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ	Wonderful! You sooooo have me on the edge of my seat! Will Lois get away? Who is following her?? Can Kenneth ease his tortured mind?? How much more evil can Lex get?! Awesome..I'm dying for more! ~Liz Lois: Can I go? Clark: No. Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go. Clark: Then why do you ask? Lois: I’m trying to be nice.

Re: FDK:Made to be Broken, 4/? #20588 04/08/05 09:37 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Sara Wow, this is heartwrenching. Tricia

Re: FDK:Made to be Broken, 4/? #20589 04/10/05 07:52 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,342 Likes: 1 Lost ethnica Top Banana
ethnica Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,342 Likes: 1 Lost	Is the next part coming soon?

Re: FDK:Made to be Broken, 4/? #20590 04/10/05 08:05 AM
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Anonymous Unregistered A	Sara you're giving me shades of Stephen King with this last segment, Rose Madder with the ATM thing. It's interesting to see it in Lois-and-Clark-a-vision. Can't wait to see where this goes next. TEEEEEJ

Re: FDK:Made to be Broken, 4/? #20591 04/11/05 05:54 AM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 385 Philomena's Milking Parlour, T... Sorcha Beat Reporter
Sorcha Beat Reporter Joined: May 2003 Posts: 385 Philomena's Milking Parlour, T...	Wow... Once again I'm awed, stunned, shocked, amazed and very, very grateful for all this terrific fdk This stuff makes my Muse very, very happy... and it also compensates somewhat for the long hours I spent torturing myself over these scenes <g> Thanks a MILLION, guys! Just as a couple of points... Quote You are the Mistress of Evil. gasp... Okay, maybe if I were reading this at this point, I'd agree with you... but don’t make up your mind for sure until you see the final few scenes, okay? And yeah - my posting schedule is twice a week The days are hopping around on me, unfortunately, because of some hectic RL stuff :rolleyes: Quote I'm an angel snigger Now THAT one I can nip in the bud straight away, courtesy of some very handy logs in my IRC folder. Watch what you say, mon amie, lest you find out JUST how evil I can be Thanks for pointing out the italics thing, Wendy - hadn't noticed it And LOL - yes, very long ride indeed :p Quote The despair just oozes off the screen. And in fact, it's all over my keyboard as I type. , and - wow. You know I adore your writing, CC, so this was a huge ego boost - thank you so much! And oh, good point about Rose Madder, TJ! I read that ages and ages ago, long before I wrote that scene... and yeah, I agree that it's somewhat similar Hopefully Lex's fate will be slightly less messier than Norman's, though - it'll have to be, if I want to keep Erica talking to me Sorry for the slight delay in posting this week - a pile of work jumped up and attacked me out of the blue Off to post part... ehm... /me sneaks peek at thread topic... part five now <g> Sara Death: Easy, Bill. You'll give yourself a heart attack and ruin my vacation. Meet Joe Black

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