Hi Mouse, I've just read the first three parts and I'm really enjoying your rewrite of this ep.
Your Alice White is great!
And a very wise woman:
“You know Alice, I just don’t get it. I’m the youngest ever reporter to win three Kerth awards and top investigative reporter at the Daily Planet, and yet I’ve misjudged the three most important men in my life. How can I be so blind?”
“Oh, Lois, that’s just the way love is. Our hearts don’t work like our minds. We can know all the facts, decide a course of action, set all sorts of rules, but when love comes a knocking… well, there’s nothing we can do about it. I know.”
Love this!
I'm looking forward to the next installment.
Ursie