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FDK: This Child Belongs To You --part 5 #20734 04/10/05 11:43 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 605 Scotland Jenni Debb OP Columnist
OP Jenni Debb Columnist Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 605 Scotland	Hi, Hope you like how this is unfolding. Again, I'd be grateful to hear your thoughts. Yours Jenni

Re: FDK: This Child Belongs To You --part 5 #20735 04/11/05 01:58 AM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada J jackiek Merriwether
jackiek Merriwether J Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada	Good part. Can't wait to see what Zara has to say about this whole situation. Superman: I hear you've been looking for me. Lois: All my life.

Re: FDK: This Child Belongs To You --part 5 #20736 04/11/05 03:32 AM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 244 back home in good ol' Germany Sira Hack from Nowheresville
Sira Hack from Nowheresville Joined: May 2003 Posts: 244 back home in good ol' Germany	Very good part! I liked your Dr. Warner and Zara's arrival was a surprise - a pleasant one. I can't wait to hear her tell them that Matthew is really theirs. Lois will be sooo happy! Sira -

Re: FDK: This Child Belongs To You --part 5 #20737 04/11/05 05:38 AM
Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,269 Connecticut ChaaBreh Top Banana
ChaaBreh Top Banana Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,269 Connecticut	You left us hanging. I want to hear Zara's story ASAP!!! Chris "Together we are stronger than each of us is apart"

Re: FDK: This Child Belongs To You --part 5 #20738 04/11/05 07:30 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 450 SW Georgia, USA BrightFeather Beat Reporter
BrightFeather Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 450 SW Georgia, USA	and just in the nick of time... Oops, sorry. <G> More soon, please. Laura “Rules only make sense if they are both kept and broken. Breaking the rule is one way of observing it.” --Thomas Moore "Keep an open mind, I always say. Drives sensible people mad, I know, but what did we ever get from sensible people? Not poetry or art or music, that's for sure." --Charles de Lint, Someplace to Be Flying

Re: FDK: This Child Belongs To You --part 5 #20739 04/11/05 07:30 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 454 The Netherlands Xanabee Beat Reporter
Xanabee Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 454 The Netherlands	Jenni, just caught up, reading all five parts in one session. Boy, what a rush! This is such a wonderful story! I'm riveted. I like your Dr. Warner and the fact that he knows about Clark and Superman. That last scene was very touching. Looking forward to part six! Ursie Lois: Well, I like my quirks. I think they make me unique. Clark: You certainly are unique. Clark: You're high maintenance, you know that? Lois: But I'm worth it!

Re: FDK: This Child Belongs To You --part 5 #20740 04/11/05 07:45 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 484 The near side of the back of b... Krissie Beat Reporter
Krissie Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 484 The near side of the back of b...	Ah, hah! So... I'm not the only Doc Warner fan out there! I love that guy, Jenni, and I can't tell you that often enough. Chris

Re: FDK: This Child Belongs To You --part 5 #20741 04/11/05 02:38 PM
Joined: Oct 2004 Posts: 509 Mexico Karla Kent Columnist
Karla Kent Columnist Joined: Oct 2004 Posts: 509 Mexico	Where are you going? Please write moreeeeeeeee I want to hear Zara's story ASAP please karla My journal: http://charmingkarla.livejournal.com/

Re: FDK: This Child Belongs To You --part 5 #20742 04/12/05 09:43 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,587 Los Angeles, CA, USA rivka Merriwether
rivka Merriwether Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,587 Los Angeles, CA, USA	I just got caught up, thinking the last part had already been posted. Do you know the most surprising thing about divorce? It doesn't actually kill you, like a bullet to the heart or a head-on car wreck. It should. When someone you've promised to cherish till death do you part says, "I never loved you," it should kill you instantly. - Under the Tuscan Sun

Re: FDK: This Child Belongs To You --part 5 #20743 04/12/05 10:29 AM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370 J Julia Beat Reporter
Julia Beat Reporter J Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370	Great part!! I'm glad Zara finally showed up to explain the baby's origin, even though the part ended before she actually had a chance to do so . I'm really looking forward to the next part. ~Julia

Re: FDK: This Child Belongs To You --part 5 #20744 04/13/05 09:02 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 605 Scotland Jenni Debb OP Columnist
OP Jenni Debb Columnist Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 605 Scotland	Hi, I'd like to thank everyone who is commenting on this story. It's really nice to have your support. I'm glad a few of you mentioned that you liked Dr Warner. I really enjoyed writing his character. Rivka, nice to know that someone else had the same solution for the baby's origins and I'm very glad that my story lives up to your expectations. However, I do hope that I don't let anyone down with the concluding parts to this story. Yours Jenni

Re: FDK: This Child Belongs To You --part 5 #20745 04/16/05 01:52 AM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 1,047 where the 7 hills and 3 rivers... CC Aiken Top Banana
CC Aiken Top Banana Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 1,047 where the 7 hills and 3 rivers...	Jenni, I know part 6 is already up, but I couldn't let this part go uncommented on. I just adore how you drew Doc Warner. Vividly rendered and so real. The little details like: Quote Ms Lane," the doctor said in a voice that was only a little stronger than his physique. And I love how smart this is, how much it tells about him and the role he has played for the Kents: Quote He supposed it was difficult for Clark to understand his motives. Young people saw things mostly in black and white, and real life was never so easily judged. Wonderful. And the scene with Superman tucking him in, and he slips and calls him 'Clark' for the first time... just great. A pleasure to read. You've made my morning. CC You mean we're supposed to have lives? Oh crap! ~Tank

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