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Hi, Firstly, I'd like to thank everyone who has commented on this story while I've been posting. Your kind words have been very much appreciated. Since my normal habit is to introduce terrorists, vocalnic eruptions, Kryptonian viruses etc, I hope you don't mind that this story is more lighthearted and concentrates mostly on Lois and Clark becoming a family of three.  Please let me know if you've been let down by the lack of villains. Yours Jenni
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hi This story was so sweet, I liked the way you wrote it, I didn´t miss the villains  Thanks for sharing this story with us. Karla
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Very sweet ending, Jenni. Of course, a sequel - the dreaded sequel - is now in order.
Let's hear how Dr. Klein figures out for them to have that 2nd and 3rd kid.
Does Matthew get super-powers?
Inquiring minds want to know LOL
Chris
"Together we are stronger than each of us is apart"
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Hi jenni, I could finally keep up with it.  Very sweet story.  I will try a more detailed fdk by e-mail later.. MDL
"Work while you have the light. You are responsible for the talent that has been entrusted to you."
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Terribly sorry, but no complaints about lack of villains or disasters will be forthcoming from this quarter. Lovely ending to a great story. And while it stands well on its own, I would surely not object to a sequel.
Do you know the most surprising thing about divorce? It doesn't actually kill you, like a bullet to the heart or a head-on car wreck. It should. When someone you've promised to cherish till death do you part says, "I never loved you," it should kill you instantly.
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Terribly sorry, but no complaints about lack of villains or disasters will be forthcoming from this quarter. Ditto!  I loved your story Jenni, your solution for the newest addition to the Kent family is very clever, and I expecially loved the new Zara, or Sara, you developed glimpes given in the show very well! will we read again about little Matt in the future? Simona
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Hi, As I might be computerless for a few days, I'm posting now to thank everyone who sent fdk telling me they enjoyed this story. Comments are always appreciated, though I'm hoping that I might also have had some readers who didn't have the time to let me know they liked my work. Yours Jenni
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I did not miss the villains. I prefer Waffy stories in general. This one was very sweet and I really enjoyed it.
Superman: I hear you've been looking for me.
Lois: All my life.
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This was a very sweet and WAFFy story, Jenni. I enjoyed it and didn't miss any villains either.
Lois: Well, I like my quirks. I think they make me unique.
Clark: You certainly are unique.
Clark: You're high maintenance, you know that?
Lois: But I'm worth it!
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Jenni,
I've been way behind on feedback. This was a lovely story. So original and with some many great, inventive, heartfelt moments.
I adored the initial tension between Lois and Clark and the visiting Kryptonians. That would certainly be there, as Zara and Ching are anything but a source of good memories for our favorite couple.
Loved your country doctor and Zara's wonderful acting- her enjoyment of earth things, and Ching's strong disapproval.
Just wonderful and fun and, of course, ultimately really touching.
I know it's late, but I wanted you to know how much I enjoyed this!
CC
You mean we're supposed to have lives?
Oh crap!
~Tank
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Hi, Great story.  I’m sorry for not commenting in previous parts.  MAF 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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