Erin, what a great story! I loved it!! Great dialogue and I loved the entire challenge. Of course I enjoy anything that results in Clark tightening his muscles!
Seriously, the banter was perfect on all sides, and I enjoyed seeing the cheers and camaraderie of the entire newsroom since Lois is often portrayed as not a fully accepted member of the group.
The kiss was PERFECT! And yes, definitely write one from Clark's POV.
How about starting that now?
Vicki
