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Well that was a cute little turn of events for that original episode. I always wondered why Lois never went back to look at the ripped up card. This version makes more sense. I'd love to know what Clark's reaction was. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
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Oh no! Lois knows the secret before she's supposed to, that means she has to die...
No, wait, that's Smallville isn't it.
Nevermind.
Tank (who figures that Clark will probably just faint)
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Welcome back, Carol!  Wendy 
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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lol, cute! Love that last line... that is *so* Lois... Welcome back, Carol See if you can stick around awhile, 'k? PJ
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Welcome back, Carol!  A great addition to the episode!  Thanks for sharing this. I look forward to reading your next story. Tricia 
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Welcome back, Carol! And great story. I loved the fact that one of the first things she thought of after she figured out The Secret was dinner flights. I'm trying to imagine the look on Clark's face, too.. he might've turned pale. heh 
"You need me. You wouldn't be much of a hero without a villain. And you do love being the hero, don't you. The cheering children, the swooning women, you love it so much, it's made you my most reliable accomplice." -- Lex Luthor to Superman, Question Authority, Justice League Unlimited
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Good twist Jose 
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Welcome back, Carol! And what a nice way to let us know you're here! This story was very cute Maybe he had multiple personalities and one kept forgetting to tell the other when the books had to be back at the library. LOL  See ya, AnnaBtG.
What we've got here is failure to communicate...
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GREAT!!!!!!!!! I like it. Is there a sequel???? Karla
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That was great Carol. "You might want to burn that"...what a nice way to slip in the knowledge of the secret. 
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Very nice, Carol. I think a sequel would be interesting too. One of the nicer revelations I've read. Welcome back and write more! Artemis
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Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis
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Wonderful and SO MUCH FUN!!!! 
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Cute and funny, Carol, and what a delightful surprise to find you back with us. Quite made my day. Really enjoyed this. You should post more often. <g> Awwwwwwww. <snuffle> <happy WAFFy sigh> And the tag line was the perfect ending. Very sweet! LabRat
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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Very cute
Grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change,
The courage to change the things I can,
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Hi, Great story. MAF
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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Thank you so much to everyone for the warm reception . It's nice to be back! I have thought of all of you often since I've been away! Thanks to the suggestions listed here, there is a companion piece in the works - tentatively titled 'Alternate Reality' - look for it soon on a message board near you! Thanks again, so much!!! I'm really glad you guys enjoyed it!
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"Alternate Reality"? I love it! You've got to write it, Carol <g>
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Artemis
History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod
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I thought this fic was great! Especially that crack about multiple personalities! lol! 
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Two things stand like stone.
Kindness in another's trouble,
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