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Squishy fruit and rotten tomatoes go here.
BrightFeather
“Rules only make sense if they are both kept and broken. Breaking the rule is one way of observing it.”
--Thomas Moore
"Keep an open mind, I always say. Drives sensible people mad, I know, but what did we ever get from sensible people? Not poetry or art or music, that's for sure."
--Charles de Lint, Someplace to Be Flying
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Hi, Great part. Rachel pulled an extra baby blanket over herself and cuddled closer to her brother. "I saw her hurt that boy," she said softly. "She *killed* him." Slow tears ran down Rachel's face. "Papa Gary would have done that to me, too. If he comes back, he could hurt you and Momma."  Is a she!  Is it really a friend of Gary? Why Clark don't hear her talking to the baby? Get back!  MAF
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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I'm happy you posted this story again!  Look forward to see what's going to happen with sweet Rachel, Jamie and Timmy! simona 
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Hi, Great parts.  I don't that kid is not going to change. All the victim look like Rachel and Tim. More ASAP, please. MAF
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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I read Little Girl Lost a while back and thought it was great. I never knew there was a continuation. I'm so happy you are re-posting because I probably never would have known. Loved the first 4 parts and I'm off to read the next.
Jackie
Superman: I hear you've been looking for me.
Lois: All my life.
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Thanks, Jackie! And thanks Maria and Simona for sticking with this. Actually, Little Girl Lost was supposed to be the first of a series. Innocence Lost is the sequel, and so far, A Kiss Goodbye comes after that. There's one planned, Lost and Found for in between IL and AKG, but I'm not sure when and if we'll get to it. Laura
“Rules only make sense if they are both kept and broken. Breaking the rule is one way of observing it.”
--Thomas Moore
"Keep an open mind, I always say. Drives sensible people mad, I know, but what did we ever get from sensible people? Not poetry or art or music, that's for sure."
--Charles de Lint, Someplace to Be Flying
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Ooh! I know the plot for Lost and Found -- or at least part of it. Believe me, you *do* want to see the story! I'd suggest you send her your "encouragement" to write it. It's awesome! Nan PS: You see, Laura, I'm not above using underhanded means to get you to write a story when it's as interesting as this one sounds! 
Earth is the insane asylum for the universe.
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Merriwether
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Well you've got my attention. I would love to read another one of your stories.
Where can I find A Kiss Goodbye?
Jackie
Superman: I hear you've been looking for me.
Lois: All my life.
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It was uploaded to the archive last week, and it's been posted here as well. I haven't had time to put it on my website yet.
Laura
Edit: If you want Lost and Found, you've gotta nag Jenni Debbage, too. <G> We're planning a little something different that requires *both* of us to write.
“Rules only make sense if they are both kept and broken. Breaking the rule is one way of observing it.”
--Thomas Moore
"Keep an open mind, I always say. Drives sensible people mad, I know, but what did we ever get from sensible people? Not poetry or art or music, that's for sure."
--Charles de Lint, Someplace to Be Flying
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