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FDK - Good Samaritan, Part 4 #23098 07/22/05 11:03 AM
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OP L Columnist L Joined: May 2003 Posts: 719	Wonderous and spellbinding. Hurt to read. Amazing. Brilliant. Insightful. Angst. Which I adore. My father died 6 months ago after battling cancer. I held his hand as he slipped away, and I'm telling you - your story really hit those emotions spot on. I'm all sore-throated now at the ressurection of the memory. I think that you can evoke that pain so easily with your words is a testament to your excellent writing skill. I eagerly await the next segment. Silence is violence. End white supremacy based violence

Re: FDK - Good Samaritan, Part 4 #23099 07/22/05 11:09 AM
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shellyem Blogger Joined: Mar 2005 Posts: 36 Louisiana	I'm really enjoying this story. Great characterization and writing style!! Looking forward to more. Clark: I have loved you from the beginning. Lois: And I'll love you till the end. My 4 Year Old Cousin: "Why is Superman wearing glasses?"

Re: FDK - Good Samaritan, Part 4 #23100 07/22/05 11:28 AM
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Anonymous Unregistered A	Gads...how do you do it? I can barely read it without my vision blurring, how do you write this? That rememberance of his little girls, his babies sitting with him, crying for their mommy...damn... Okay I can barely get this out. I'm gone, but still reading, awaiting next section. TEEEEEEJ

Re: FDK - Good Samaritan, Part 4 #23101 07/22/05 11:29 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 40 Rockville MD terry Blogger
terry Blogger Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 40 Rockville MD	Wow. Just... wow. I can't wait for the next installment. Is it Tuesday yet? Terry

Re: FDK - Good Samaritan, Part 4 #23102 07/22/05 11:42 AM
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gerry Columnist G Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 543 Canada	Wow! gerry

Re: FDK - Good Samaritan, Part 4 #23103 07/22/05 11:58 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	This was so heart wrenching and sad. I am sure all of us can relate to some kind of loss. Certainly this brings some to mind. You have a way of making us feel what they are feeling with your words. Just beautiful. Beautifully done. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK - Good Samaritan, Part 4 #23104 07/22/05 12:49 PM
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Julia Beat Reporter J Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370	Your writing style is just amazing! It took my breath away and leaves me speechless. This story is so touching and heartbreaking

Re: FDK - Good Samaritan, Part 4 #23105 07/22/05 03:59 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,587 Los Angeles, CA, USA rivka Merriwether
rivka Merriwether Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,587 Los Angeles, CA, USA	Do you know the most surprising thing about divorce? It doesn't actually kill you, like a bullet to the heart or a head-on car wreck. It should. When someone you've promised to cherish till death do you part says, "I never loved you," it should kill you instantly. - Under the Tuscan Sun

Re: FDK - Good Samaritan, Part 4 #23106 07/22/05 05:26 PM
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mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Beautiful! Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK - Good Samaritan, Part 4 #23107 07/22/05 09:07 PM
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TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Diane WOW! I'm speechless. Please post ASAP. Tricia

Re: FDK - Good Samaritan, Part 4 #23108 07/26/05 03:20 AM
Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 430 CA A Aria Beat Reporter
Aria Beat Reporter A Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 430 CA	Thanks for all these great comments Quote Gads...how do you do it? I can barely read it without my vision blurring, how do you write this? Quote I think that you can evoke that pain so easily with your words is a testament to your excellent writing skill. Quote You have a way of making us feel what they are feeling with your words. Just beautiful. Beautifully done. Quote So heartwrenching and realistic! [Whinging] I'm sure many of us can relate to Jake's feelings and memories. [Mecry] It really touched me that you all are finding this so moving and real. A great loss is always hard to deal with, and I wasn't sure I could do it justice in a 60ish page story, but you all have confirmed that I've somehow managed it, and that's a wonderful compliment I will try and have the next part up before 5 EST -- I have to wait until I get home from work. Thanks again all Grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, The courage to change the things I can, And the wisdom to know the difference.

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