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ROTFL!

I can just see David berating Troy. LOL!

Not sure they got Martha, though She seemed to know where this was going all along.

More!!!

See ya,
AnnaBtG.

Ooh, I like the concept. I like Troy and the obvious fact that he's been warned about Martha's family and their disdain for 'art.' And I DON'T like those 'artsy' movies where everything means something else and you can't tell what's really happening unless you already KNOW what's happening! (Yeah, been clobbered by a couple of those myself.)

The only suggestion I'd make about this story is to let Martha pontificate for several paragraphs about what meant what in this thing. That way it would really look like they got her. Of course, then you'd have to think up something else (that didn't involve a hammer) to put in this movie. But you can do it!

Love this series, Mary!

PJ

Hi,

Cute story. I'm losing the sequence of these stories.

MAF

Thanks for the comments, guys!

Eh heh.
Ah, see, this is why I wasn't sure about the ending. I knew some Folcs would get it, and some wouldn't. I didn't know if it would be to egg-heady for everyone, but at the same time, I didn't want to underestimate the nice readers. Kind of a tricky balance; or maybe I'm just a nut.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dadaism

So, to those of you who got it, congrats and I hope you enjoyed it. To those who didn't, I apologize; I know I kinda botched the execution somewhat.


OOOh, yes! And the sequence of stories so far is this:

(in cronological order)

Digging for Dirt
Mysteries of Life
Louissa and Mark: The New Adventures of the Hulk
The Big Debut
Now THAT'S what I call ART!
Bride of the Butcher
Revenge of the.....this one.

I *think* that's all of them so far. Hope it helps.

And thanks for all the lovely comments!

You know, I knew what Dadaism was, but I kinda just forgot for a minute when I wrote my first comment. But then, that was also the time in European history when there were anarchist organizations and conventions. It's hard to be more ironic than having and 'organization' of anarchists, unless it's a nonsense movie poking fun at Dada.

But I'll fess up, you got me.