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FDK To Wake from Dreams (1/16) #23901 09/02/05 11:20 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach OP Pulitzer
OP Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Oh no this is just too sad! I hope he tells her as soon as he gets her home. How can he watch her pain and not. If he loves her he will tell her. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK To Wake from Dreams (1/16) #23902 09/02/05 12:14 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Wow! Great start. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK To Wake from Dreams (1/16) #23903 09/02/05 12:51 PM
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California groobie Kerth
groobie Kerth Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California	Quote “Lois, I know that. Clark does too… I mean, Clark did too," he corrected himself quickly. He noticed her wince and shake her head at his correction. Oh no, he'd better not be making that mistake again! If Clark has any sort of conscience, he will stop her suffering by confessing the truth. I look forward to seeing how long it takes him, and what the repercussions will be. Excellent start! Susan You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.

Re: FDK To Wake from Dreams (1/16) #23904 09/02/05 01:01 PM
Joined: May 2005 Posts: 111 Onaleia Hack from Nowheresville
Onaleia Hack from Nowheresville Joined: May 2005 Posts: 111	Powerful stuff here. Wow.

Re: FDK To Wake from Dreams (1/16) #23905 09/02/05 01:14 PM
Joined: Jul 2005 Posts: 247 Incognito Hack from Nowheresville
Incognito Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Jul 2005 Posts: 247	Powerful start, indeed. Moving descriptions; Lois' pain was very tangible. I look forward to seeing how this plays out. Chris "Superman is a guy who's seen wonders we'll never see and Lois is to him, one of those wonders."

Re: FDK To Wake from Dreams (1/16) #23906 09/02/05 04:02 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca... Wendymr Pulitzer
Wendymr Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca...	Wow, Nicole! This is excellent! When you told me you were working on a TOGOM adaptation, I had no idea that you'd be ready to post so soon - you were holding out! Okay, so since this came up so quickly, when do we get part 2??? Wendy Just a fly-by! waves

Re: FDK To Wake from Dreams (1/16) #23907 09/02/05 04:09 PM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 1,356 Italy S Simona Top Banana
Simona Top Banana S Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 1,356 Italy	This is powerful stuff! I take a TOGOM rewrite with pleasure everytime, but this is Super! Ok, I'm just crying right now, so I'll try to put together some coherent comments tomorrow. Thank you! simona

Re: FDK To Wake from Dreams (1/16) #23908 09/02/05 09:39 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Nicole WOW! Tricia

Re: FDK To Wake from Dreams (1/16) #23909 09/02/05 10:42 PM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 451 Burbank, California Nicole S Beat Reporter
Nicole S Beat Reporter Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 451 Burbank, California	Hi! Thank you for making an otherwise just-okay night really wonderful! These comments were so nice to come home to!! I've never really touched TOGOM, but it's probably my favorite episode. I cannot wait for the 2nd season DVDs to come out, because my old tape of it is so messed up from overuse! There are white lines all throughout that episode! But anyway, thank you thank you THANK YOU for the positive feedback to this story so far. I have 97% (but nearly 98) done, so I think you can expect Part 2 soon. Tomorrow. The next day... something like that ~NICOLE

Re: FDK To Wake from Dreams (1/16) #23910 09/03/05 01:00 AM
Joined: Apr 2005 Posts: 546 France P Poussin Columnist
Poussin Columnist P Joined: Apr 2005 Posts: 546 France	Wow. I loved that part. Really great beginning. The despair of Lois is so well written that I've cried myself endlessly. I would like to read more yet. Very good.

Re: FDK To Wake from Dreams (1/16) #23911 09/03/05 09:03 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 543 Canada G gerry Columnist
gerry Columnist G Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 543 Canada	A wow from me too. The part I found most touching was Lois finding Clark's glasses, somethng concrete for her to represent her grief and her denial. I wonder about what role Jimmy will play? I hope it's an important one. gerry

Re: FDK To Wake from Dreams (1/16) #23912 09/03/05 01:47 PM
Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 151 London, England SNL Hack from Nowheresville
SNL Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 151 London, England	That's my initial thoughts, It looks like this story will be another one that I will be hooked on. I;m sitting here waiting for part two. And as the punch line in the old Carry On Films says, "Don't stop ... Carry on ..." SNL

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