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Thank you again for the positive reponse to Part 1!! smile

I hope you enjoy Part 2!!


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Her last story. *sob* This continues to break my heart.

I also really liked the Jonathan and Martha scene, especially when Martha said that they still had a reason to be grateful.

Looking forward to the next chapter, Nicole! smile


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Can't wait for the next one either. It is so sad. Hope she doesn't really quit her job.

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You know...you have a terrible way of stopping your segment right when it is getting good!! devil


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Aw it is so sad, I wish you would post longer sections. Laura


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Oh, poor Lois! And yet it makes sense that she'd be thinking of walking away from reporting the news. She'd equate that, and her driven behaviour in doing it, with Clark getting killed. mecry

Of course, the alternative would be to become even more driven and decide that her last story was going to be the apprehension of Clark's killers... that she was going to go after them and catch them and then hand in her Press pass. Still, this way makes sense too.

And Jonathan - so true! frown

Hurry up and post more!


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Hi,

Wow! Great part. thumbsup Martha should call Lois or invite he to visit Smallville.


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“I can’t be here anymore,” she finally said, breaking her gaze from the nothingness before her – which seemed to have been playing a movie for her… a horrible, painful movie – and looked at Superman. The only side to him that still existed. “I’m going to change and then I want to go to the Planet.”

“Lois, I really don’t think you should do that. You’ve been through something awful and you need to calm down. If you’re not going to go to a hospital, then you really must stay here, Lois. Relax. Sleep,” he said, lamely.

She looked him in the eye, her face hard and determined and absolutely wretched. “I need to go to the Planet.”
eek Superman didn't get it.

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Hey all!! smile1


Thanks for the feedback! Always nice to see at the end of the day! I am so excited I don't have work tomorrow though! laugh Yay Labor Day!


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Of course, the alternative would be to become even more driven and decide that her last story was going to be the apprehension of Clark's killers... that she was going to go after them and catch them and then hand in her Press pass.
I love that idea! It's, as you can see in this section, not the way I've gone... but it's a powerful way to play out her rage and grief and a dramatic quit. Wish I'd thought of it!!

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eek Superman didn't get it.
And all I can say is: please don't kill me. But we've seen it before. He CAN be a lunkhead!!!

Anyway, I am off. laugh And thanks all for replying!!


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An excellent part! smile1

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