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Great news, FoLCs!! Lynn did it again!!! 
Methos: "I'm easily amused."
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Fabulous, Lynn! I particularly liked the effect you did with the words and that delicious pic of Clark about half way through.  Yvonne
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Yay, I loved it! I'm so glad you made one for yourself! I only wish I had your talent!
Fantastic, Lynn! I'm still grinning just thinking about it. Great story and great trailer!
Kathy
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AMAZING!! Great job Lynn (and of course a great story!)!!  Kudos! ~Liz
Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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WOW! Great graphics and scenes 
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Wow great trailer! I love the red screen with the floating text! Is that in Premiere? And yes it was a great story Lynn. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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I adored this one, Lynn! It gave me the shivers from around ten seconds in... just wonderful!! And I especially liked your use of the phrase from the story: completely; irrevocably; endlessly. A perfect fit! Especially with the way the music crescendos at that point.  Wendy
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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Excellent, Lynn! The music's great, and I'm very impressed by your choice of video clips -- especially the ones of Lois watching TV. I know the original context, but these fit *so* well into the fanfic. I could almost see the wheels turning in Lois's brain as she starts thinking, there's no blood... Of course, I then had to read the story again and was up til midnight, and it's all your fault! PJ
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Thanks, everyone, for your kind words. I have to tell you, I felt kind of funny about posting this one. It just seems kind of self-promoting to do a trailer for one of my own stories. I'd much rather do them for all of the other great stories out there. To explain, I used Save Me, Superman for my practice trailer - the one I experimented with while learning the ins and outs of Movie Maker and how to pull clips and cut music. And after all of the blood, sweat and tears I spent doing it, somehow just sharing it with my husband (who isn't nearly appreciative enough of things LnC) wasn't very satisfying. "It's great, honey. What's with this obsession of yours, anyway? I'm starting to get worried..." So I'm shoving it out here into the world. Thanks for indulging me by taking a look. My creative muse is now completely comatose. I think I'll take a break and do some major catch-up reading. Besides, we're all way long overdue for some new Pel stuff. She's all better now, so where are they?! Lynn
You know that boy'd walk on water for you? Or he'd drown tryin'. -Perry White to Lois in Just Say Noah
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I am a little late to reply, but I felt I had to read the story before I did. The story is excellent, Lynn! It actually made me cry !  And not many do. And the trailer is excellent, too. That segment where Lois is on the floor and crying, just gets me every time. Even though we have more than enough TOGOM rewrites (*cough* Wendy *cough*), I always find myself enjoying them. Keep writing and making more trailers! Julie
Mulder: Imagine if you could come back and take out five people who had caused you to suffer. Who would they be?
Scully: I only get five?
Mulder: I remembered your birthday this year, didn't I, Scully?
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What Julie said.
This was wonderful!
I went back and reread the story and you know what...? It was wonderful!
Keep doing that thing you do--and I'm glad you brought this to us, I mean, husbands are nice, but who would enjoy it more than we would??
CC
You mean we're supposed to have lives?
Oh crap!
~Tank
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Oh wow, Lynn! Fantastic! I have no words for it, so I'll just say, wow!  Kaethel
- I'm your partner. I'm your friend.
- Is that what we are?
- Oh, you know what? I don't know what we are. We kiss and then we never talk about it. We nearly die frozen in each other's arms, but we never talk about it, so no, I got no clue what we are.
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Lynn, this was absolutely awesome! I will say ditto to everyone's comments, except for this teeny little part of Julie's Even though we have more than enough TOGOM rewrites no no no no no. I don't think we can ever have too many TOGoM rewrites. Every time we think it's all been done before, someone comes along with a whole new twist - like Anne did just recently with Not All Geese Are Wild, and you did with your marvelous Save Me, Superman. But as fantastic as these two trailers you've done have been, you probably need more practice, right? Lots and lots more practice... And there are lots of stories on the Archive. Don't hesitate to practice on one of your own - we don't mind at all!  Wonderful job... Kathy
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I totally loved it! I can't remember if I have ever read that one....i'm going to go and read it now!...even though it is 4 is the morning.
That is one of my husband's favourite songs. I was so surprised when I heard it! I have only heard him play it for me.
SOOOO Fab!!!!!!!!!
I totally want to learn how to do that! I've been wanting to for sooooo long.
I've converted to lurk-ism... hopefully only temporary.
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This is terrific... I love the scenes you chose and the text. Furthermore, the fic itself is great! ~Lauren
Clark: Lois, you're kinda babbling.
Lois: I know. See, I never babble.
Clark: Are you kidding? You're a brook.
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Wow... just...wow!! This was breathtaking, beautiful, unbelievable!! Thank you for sharing this and please, keep them coming! Ines
"It is our choices, that show what we truly are, far more than our abilities." (Albus Dumbledore, CoS)
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WOW, Lynn! This is fantastic. You capture the mood of the story superbly. Thanks for sharing your amazing talents with us. Tricia 
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