Nice song choice! I also liked the scenes you used, esp. the massage scene in The Phoenix, and hugging in TGGGOH. Also, great lyric matches on things like "rain". That song's perfect for L&C, isn't it? Surprised it hasn't been done before (to my knowledge anyway.)
It might be cool in your next video to use transitions of some sort between scenes... especially a "dissolve" transition, if your software has it, especially in a slow song like this. If your software doesn't have that, then oh well, but that's something that might add a little extra something to videos in the future.
Congratulations on your first video! So, was it fun & everything else you imagined it would be?