My apologies for not leaving feedback before this. I often wait until a story is finished these days before reading it.
This would have been remarkable even if it weren't a first story, and I really enjoyed it. I always wondered why, in the series, Lois didn't follow Clark to see where he went when he gave one of his lame excuses and ran away. It took the events in "And the Answer Is" to push her into it, which really wasn't in Lois's character. I'd think she should have gotten curious a lot sooner. I especially liked the ending, too. Instead of dithering around about the whole thing, she made up her mind and went after him.
I hope we'll be seeing more from you in the not too distant future. New writers are always welcome around here.
Nan
