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Hi! I know this is a really short section and I apologize! The next one will be longer  I hope you enjoy Part 5!  ~NICOLE
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AHHAHHH! Just when there's hope, you cut it off!!! I will be on the edge of my seat until you post the next part...Love your story so far...keep up the great work...
Lola
"We're both barefoot, both flushed, and we both look guilty as hell. Clark has finger-combed his hair but I'm positive mine looks like I was just f… fished out of the river."
<3 this fic!
'The Next Step' By Sue S.
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Hi, Great part. 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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I tried to wait it out so I could read the entire story in one sitting. Then I wouldn't have to deal with cliffhangers. But waiting for 16 parts! I couldn't do it. Now I kind of wish I had. This is heartbreaking! But so good! You are doing such a wonderful job laying out everyone's emotions and making it so real. I'm in awe. I am desparetly hoping that the next part brings the two of them together and the secret out the window.
~Kristen
Joey: If he doesn't like you, then this is all just a moo point.
Rachel: A moo point?
Joey: Yeah, it's like a cow's opinion, you know, it just doesn't matter. It's "moo."
Rachel: Have I been living with him for too long, or did that all just make sense?
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Hey get back here you fink! too short is right. I want to know what happens! Post soon! Laura 
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Wow, Lois is going to FREAK OUT! and so is Clark. But then afterwards, it'll be ALL GOOD....
Chris
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lol... she COULD freak out... or not... :rolleyes: Again, sorry about the length of this section. I don't mean to be a fink!! Honest!!  I'll post more tomorrow! Again, thank you for the replies! So nice ~NICOLE
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Ahh, I just caught up with this story tonight. Is she still there? Will she freak out? I can't wait to find out what happens! JD 
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I love cliffhangers! What a great way to torture us poor readers. Clark has let Lois suffer for over a week?! He'd better have a really good bedtime story to tell her when they wake up! I'll be checking back frequently for more. Susan
You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.
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If cuss words could kill...
"I'm red-eyed, tired and drunk" Teri Hatcher
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I love your story.
In the four first part, youdescribed admirably the feelings of loss and grieves of Lois, and this fifth part is just really great.
We have briefly but efficaciously the other side of the story: the feelings of Clark. And we have too a great cliffhanger.
I just want to read right now what will happen when they will wake up. That will be something !
You post the next part tomorrow, that is ? OK, that will be hard, but I guess I can wait until tomorrow.
Great part.
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Nicole Another excellent part! Tricia 
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Hey! Thanks for the feedback again!! and for encouraging me in this story. A few small tweaks and part 6 will be up in a little while!! Later today though! NICOLE
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