Lois & Clark Forums Forums General Discussion FoLC Productions New Trailer: Broken Moon

Hi Everyone!!!

My computer has been on the fritts for awhile. But I have recently been able to get it back in action. And in doing so I was able to download the better version of Windows Movie Maker, and now I have found out how to make trailers.

This trailer is about a story that I am in the process of working/almost finishing. And I've wanted to make a trailer for it. And to make a long story short...I made one! I hope you all like it. Surprisingly it didn't take me very long to make.

I would like to thank my wonderful partner in crime, Rachel. She has helped me with so many things...shes a life saver! Thanks Rach!!!

Alright that's enough of my babble for right now. Take a look at it, and give me some comments. Good or bad are welcome. Just remember this was my first time making a trailer...so be gentle Thanks!!

Later Days!
Andie
Broken Moon Trailer

So sad, Andie!!!!

Great job on the trailer, very haunting. Can't wait to read the story... though... you will be handing out tissues with that, right?

Sara

Oooooooh. Great title! And great trailer.

Lots of images of my poor boy looking so sad. <snuffle> Hope you finish the story soon and make him happy again. <g>

Well done!

LabRat

Wow! This story looks right up my street, Andi! I hope you're posting soon!

Great trailer, too. The music is a terrific choice - haunting, sad, understated. Really nice! And the images and title cards are very effective, especially the clip from Mayson's funeral put together with Lois's grave from Tempus, Anyone? Very well done!

Just one comment - the opening quote didn't stay on the screen long enough to allow me to read it. I had to rewind three times before I managed to read it - the small font size didn't help either. If you're minded to edit, that's something worth changing.

Nice job!


Wendy

Kinda sad and angsty looking. Hoping to see this one up soon.

TEEEEEJ

Sounds like a good one. I am looking forward to it. Nice trailer. Laura

HI Everyone!!!

Thank You all SOOOO VERY MUCH!!! That means so much to me that you liked it! I've been grining ear to ear

I'm sorry that the quote wasn't readable, and it didn't stay up long enough. But I redid it, and so hopefully everyone will be able to read it Please tell me if it needs to stay on longer or if you still can't read it and I will fix it.

Later Days!
Andie

That was beautiful!! And only your first??!?! It was awesome!!!!!!! So sad I'm so glad your back!! Again Great trailer!!!

jen

I loved the Yanni!!! His music is a personal favorite of mine, and I know a lot of his songs, but Whisper in the Dark had slipped my mind, so I had to go dig it up and listen again--and fell in love. It is truly an angsty-sounding song, and an excellent choice for such angsty material (where a lot of modern pop songs would NOT have worked). Story sounds interesting and I'm eager to read! (I liked Tryst and A Twist of Fates, fics where Lois had died but was around as a ghost--for a basic summary--and I find post-deathfics with a hopeful ending to be quite enjoyable! )