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Thanks for the feedback so far! I hope you will enjoy part 6!


~NICOLE

Hi,

Great part.

That was a short, frustrating chapter for me.

#1 = with Clark's super=senses, I find it hard to believe that he didn't hear Lois' heart beat and/or they didn't touch during the night.

#2 Jimmy should have noticed that Lois or someone had been there recently, if he truly has merit as an investigative reporter.

Time to get the two of them together!

I totally hear you!! Just... trust me!!


I can see your point... I had pictured naive Jimmy, who was seeing his friend's place for the first time after his death, and wasn't exactly thinking like a reporter... my only defense on that...


And MAF, I am not evil!!! hehe... well, I don't stay evil, anyway


Thanks for the feedback!!


~NICOLE

Hi,

Personally, I think a little bit of more gilt for Clark.

What will Clark do if Lois losses contact with reality?

MAF

And he's got enough of that building up, huh?


Good question... But no comment


~NICOLE