I really liked this one, Louise.
Very WAFFy and sweet. I especially loved how almost all the clips you used were of them flying.
I did notice the odd cuts within scenes like TJ was talking about. I haven't compared it to the source material to see what that looks like, but if there are shots that you edited out between the two cuts, it might look better to use a fade there. Does that make sense? Anyway, it's just a suggestion.
Great work overall. I love the Disney songs and I'd love to see more of them.
~Anna