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This is a trailer for a story called "The Darkness Within" by Lyds, which has been on the archive for ages. I've been meaning to do this one since I started learning to use moviemaker, but could never figure out how to portray it quite right. When I heard this song, Spiritual Fear, by Rhea's Obsession, I thought it fit perfectly and the wheels started spinning. Hope you enjoy! The Darkness Within
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Ooh, creepy! Goes perfectly with Lyds' story. Very, very dark, very chilling, lots of atmosphere.  I have to say, Diane, you do terrific trailers! Wendy 
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Oh Wow I havwe to agree, this had a very dark edgieness to it. I have to go read the fic now. LAura
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Wow ! Awesome ! That trailer was really great, and you're right to think the music fit perfectly the atmosphere of the story.
You did a GREAT job. That wasn't a story easy to made in trailer, but you did it perfectly. You choose the perfect clip, and the text you wrote in the title cards reinforce the feeling.
Very very good trailer.
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Very fascinating. I haven't read this story, and now I most definitely want to. And that signifies a successful trailer, doesn't it? Thank you.
*heads off to read*
Chris
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So evil! You got my interest! Very well done! ~Lois Lane Wanna Be
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Walk to the edge.
Listen Hard.
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Laugh.
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Fits the story wonderfully and captures its intensely sinister quality!
Great job.
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Diane A fantastic trailer!  Tricia 
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Thank you all so much I'm glad I enticed you to read this story, and I had a lot of fun making a creepy trailer, it's always fun to play with atmospheric styles.
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I can't download it 
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Sorry! I missed this reply down here -- Nathalie, I wish I could help you Without more specifics it's hard to diagnose a problem like that, unfortunately. Hope you get it working!
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Silence is violence. End white supremacy based violence
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