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Nice comeback, windfall!  Kind of like watching the series on a highlights tape -- only the good parts  -- and then fast-forwarding to the happy ending, still in progress... and I thought the slang was totally push!  PJ
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and I thought the slang was totally push!  Nice. Welcome back, Windfall! That was definitely a feel-good read; thanks for sharing. I may have to break out with some of that slang...I tend to spread a lot of slang words around campus.  JD
"Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy
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That was so sweet! I had tears in my eyes, imagining them 20 years in the future w/ children all grown up, getting emotional watching their first-born graduating college. Pam was right; it was like a series highlight, which was great! A well-written montage! This was a great story! ~NICOLE
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Hi, Beautiful! 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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That was a well done story. I especially loved the travel in Clark's memories And the slang was fun Welcome back to writing! See ya, AnnaBtG.
What we've got here is failure to communicate...
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That was so nice. Very sweet!
Jackie
Superman: I hear you've been looking for me.
Lois: All my life.
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Welcome back, Windfall!  I thoroughly enjoyed it. Tricia 
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very nice story indeed 
I will and always be a big fan of Lois and Clark forever and forever.
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