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For all of you who are still with me, I'm flattered. Thanks Poussin, Yvonne, Laura, Sheila, Nan, Maria, James and Andreia and Ankit.
Let me know what you think!
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Top Banana
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Angst! Hurry back! This story is great and you have the amazing ability to kep the mountain...umh...cliff hangers going. Where is Clark? Shouldn't he arrive just in time? 
I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.
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Hi, Great part. 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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We are still here Shayne. Wow she just got out of that one, but where to? I am looking forward to hearing more about Clark also. Hopefully a little B plot will come up as well. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Ack!
Tell Clark to hurry and come back!
Nan
Earth is the insane asylum for the universe.
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Ack, close call there, Lois!
Great part!
JD
"Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy
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If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it.
Waking a Miracle by Aria
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Columnist
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You definitely have a gift for writing action scenes with suspense. I'm dying to know what will happen next.
I hope everything's okay for Clark at the fire. Maybe he's in trouble, too. And I definitely hope that he will be back in time to save Lois.
And I agree with Laura, I hope for a little B-Plot before the end.
Great story. I love it. Keep it that way, and please: more soon.
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Angst  I didn't see any angst. Now, suspense/tension, definitely. Originally posted by poussin:
You definitely have a gift for writing action scenes with suspense. I'm dying to know what will happen next.
Yes, I must agree, couldn't have said it better myself. James
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People sure know what to get Lois for gifts. Very practical. Someone needs to wrap a SWK for her so she can always be prepared...or maybe they should wrap The Boy Scout for her.  Please post soon and get Lois out of this predicament. gerry
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Shayne!
This is great stuff. I always enjoy your writing with L&C. I especially like the way you write how Clark seems to be slowing down time when he does his "Super" stuff. This story has become very suspenseful too. So, let's get on with it. Can you start posting every other day or so???? Huh???? No??? Hummm, I could always hope. :rolleyes:
Well, write on!
Anne
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