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Comments: Single White Kryptonian 20 #24784 10/18/05 12:10 PM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 814 Texas ShayneT OP Features Writer
OP ShayneT Features Writer Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 814 Texas	Sorry it's been so long. My sister is working on having a baby at the moment and has had a couple of close calls. She's a week or so from term and it's been a bit of a distraction to say the least. That being said, let me know what you think about this section. And thanks for hanging on!

Re: Comments: Single White Kryptonian 20 #24785 10/18/05 12:25 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Oh I liked it Shayne. I like how he swept her off her feet. I like the discription of the feeling of flying from Lois's pov. I never thought about the lights streaming together like that but it made so much sense when I read it. Of course, they would have to look like that at that speed. Nice developement of plot and character relationships. I am looking forward to more soon. Good luck to your sister and the baby! And congratulations Uncle! Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: Comments: Single White Kryptonian 20 #24786 10/18/05 12:40 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: Comments: Single White Kryptonian 20 #24787 10/18/05 01:04 PM
Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,441 Likes: 1 Dublin, Ireland Ank. K. S. Top Banana
Ank. K. S. Top Banana Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,441 Likes: 1 Dublin, Ireland	Loved it ~Ankit If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it. Waking a Miracle by Aria

Re: Comments: Single White Kryptonian 20 #24788 10/18/05 02:24 PM
Joined: Oct 2003 Posts: 1,363 Savannah, GA Sheila Top Banana
Sheila Top Banana Joined: Oct 2003 Posts: 1,363 Savannah, GA	This was excellent! Please don't stress us out waiting for the next part! Loved it! I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.

Re: Comments: Single White Kryptonian 20 #24789 10/18/05 02:32 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 543 Canada G gerry Columnist
gerry Columnist G Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 543 Canada	Glad you found time to write and post. Becoming an uncle is a very exciting and distracting experience. At least Clark and Lois got away and have a chance to regroup. Is Spenser Spenser the boss or is his abandoned island just a luxury? I hope they get a time to enjoy themselves there. Shower, sunbathe, talk... It's interesting how the characters are developing. Carl is part of the gang, but he wants to help Lois and Clark. They must have had a strong relationship as boys. Awaiting the next post, gerry

Re: Comments: Single White Kryptonian 20 #24790 10/20/05 01:05 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet... Mister Data Pulitzer
Mister Data Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet...	Nice part. Hope that Spencer Spencer has already been dealt with in the past so that they can have time to talk. However, I think you are too to let this opportunity for torture to pass by... James “…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26. Also read Nan's Terran Underground!

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