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#248136 07/08/07 04:18 AM
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Ok, so last week on my way to work I put a Anastacia-CD into my CD-Player and there it was: an idea to a music video. In my mind I had the video already finished, but unfortunately after 9 hours at work most of my ideas were gone whinging

Nevertheless I tried my best to "reconstruct" that video and here it is now:

(edit: new links because I've changed the video smile )
Anastacia - You'll never be alone / YouTube or FoLC-Video

I have to admit that I'm not very pleased with the final version, but I totally ran out of ideas near the ending of the song. Somehow it's a bit rushed, but somehow it's also a bit lengthy frown . Dunno ... maybe someone has an idea of what I could change?


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It's really cute and sweet!
You did a really great editing job, chose great clips, and I really like the sepia tone on some of the clips.

The ending part was pretty long, the only suggestion I would make would be to break it up with a few more cute clips of them together. I know 4:00 is really hard to fill, though! Great job! thumbsup

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awww! that was so nice and saaaad!!! and it made me cry. mecry

you did a lovely job with this song! and yeah, 4 minutes is looooong to fill, so good job!


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Don't you hate it when you get good ideas and have to wait to execute them? I carry a small pad of paper in my purse just for that reason. <g>

I liked the part where the lyrics said "if you call my name" and Lois started saying Clark and he started saying "Lois" - awww... so sweet.

Yeah, the ending was a little long. You did so great with the sepia flashbacks... maybe you could have added a few more of those mixed in at the end...

But thanks for sharing.

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thanks for the feedback and ideas of what to change smile . it seems that the best ideas i have in my car to and from work and so today near home i had some ideas on how to change the things. hopefully i won't forget everything until my *censored* movie maker has loaded everything ... /me searching for a piece of paper ...


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ok, this evening i tried to change the things that had disturbed me in the video and hopefully it's now better huh smile

Here are the new links:

You'll never be alone - YouTube or FoLC-Video


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Very cute video. Now that you've changed the ending, which was really good work, it's lovely to watch. And the song was a super choice for the scenes you used (though I think you had the song first in your head and the scenes afterwards...)

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Oh yeah I enjoyed the video!

I just love Anastacia!!
and you made a really sweet ''Home Is Where The Hurt Is'' video.
I like the part were they're calling for each other, really fit there!! smile


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Originally posted by Babsi:
... though I think you had the song first in your head and the scenes afterwards...
I admit: yes wink

and thanks once again to everyone for the feedback smile


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