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FDK Blurring the Lines (3/13) #251188 05/11/12 08:40 AM
Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA mozartmaid OP Top Banana
OP mozartmaid Top Banana Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA	And comments are a great bonus! Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.

Re: FDK Blurring the Lines (3/13) #251189 05/11/12 11:47 AM
Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida KenJ Pulitzer
KenJ Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida	Just finished this part. Good job! Only one thing. In the future scene when Zod is talking to Tess he said - 'dare defies' and it should be 'dares to defy' Can't wait for the next chapter. Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found here kj

Re: FDK Blurring the Lines (3/13) #251190 05/12/12 04:24 AM
Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA mozartmaid OP Top Banana
OP mozartmaid Top Banana Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA	Quote Originally posted by KenJ: Only one thing. In the future scene when Zod is talking to Tess he said - 'dare defies' and it should be 'dares to defy' It may not be grammatically correct, but I took it from the scene itself. I'll listen again, but I'm pretty sure he says 'dare defies me.' Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.

Re: FDK Blurring the Lines (3/13) #251191 05/12/12 10:43 AM
Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida KenJ Pulitzer
KenJ Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida	Maid, I have been advised that it is OK to clean up mistakes made in the dialogue in the series when you are writing. Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found here kj

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