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Well, We're almost done. Thanks again for sticking around. Let me know what you think.
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Wow, quite interesting. I didn't quite make the connection with Jess and Trask until they both showed up. Definitely a curveball! And go, Carl! Show some backbone.  Can't wait to see the big finale.
"You need me. You wouldn't be much of a hero without a villain. And you do love being the hero, don't you. The cheering children, the swooning women, you love it so much, it's made you my most reliable accomplice." -- Lex Luthor to Superman, Question Authority, Justice League Unlimited
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Top Banana
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This part had some quick action, but nevertheless amazing. Clark's constant concern for Lois' safety tells a lot about his healing from old wounds  ~Ankit
If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it.
Waking a Miracle by Aria
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Pulitzer
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Hi, Get back here!  Great part.  :rolleyes: Trask thought he was in control.
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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Pulitzer
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Wow now that was a shocker. I never suspected Jess! Good job Shayne. Talk about out of the fire into the frying pan. Wow! I hope they get away from Trask too. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Top Banana
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Whoa...that was powerful! Who would have thunk? I cannot wait to see how you tie all of this up. This was a very well written story! 
I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.
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Columnist
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Way to go, Carl!  Now let's wrap this all up nicely and get the heck out of Smallville. gerry
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Pulitzer
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Tsk, tsk, tsk...Trask is just too impatient! If he had waited just a little longer, Lois would have been dead and...
/self tells self to shut up.
Wow, that was something else. Looking forward to the conclusion, SOON!
James
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