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Loved this, Rachel! I was giggling the whole way through it. A perfect end to a funny, WAFFy and thoroughly entertaining story.  As for the final scene, I didn't think the story could get any better or funnier... until I saw what costumes Lois had finally chosen for them. Clark as Sir Percy Blakeney, indeed! And I loved the little touch in that final section - they were friends, which was how it should be, but a date could well be some time in the near future. Lovely! Now... have you sent this to the archive, and when's your next story coming?  Wendy 
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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Well, that ended nicely. I would be willing to swear that I posted a nagging "Where is Trick or Treat" yesterday. Am I hallucinating?  Nevertheless...good little story and please do it again sometime. 
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Cute!  So when do we see more from you? 
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 Fantastic!
If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it.
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 Oh, Clark! Gotta give the woman more credit! This was a fun and just really cute story! Thanks for sharing! ~NICOLE
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Oh my lord that was cute. I kept waiting for him to finally come out with it and when he did, it couldn't have been funnier. I like this portrayal of the non "galactically stupid" Lois. If there was anything that bothered me about the show, it was her inability to see what was right in front of her. I mean, I've seen my dad in glasses and out of glasses (though not in tights and a cape thank God) and I would never mistake him for someone else entirely, so that always bugged me a little, considering she is so intelligent. Anyway, just loved your take on this. Great job.
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Hi, Cute story.
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Just adorable. I hope we see some more stories from you soon. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
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Great story! Great relevation, good that Lois figured it out by herself. She put up nice little set-up for Clark to give himself away  
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Very nice and so cute!
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Cute story! I love how Lois figured out the secret. And backed Clark into a corner about telling her. Hee!
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Rachel This is a great story! I thoroughly enjoyed it. Tricia 
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Wonderful! Funny, and you did a good job of keeping the 'trick' in the story a surprise. There wasn't an early give-away of how the revelation would turn out - well done! And I liked the distinction Los was obviously making between Clark's persona - you demonstrated so clearly to us (and to Clark) that she did, indeed, consider herself to be with Clark, not Superman. Get this to the archive pronto, okay? It deserves to be shared. ~Toc Oh, yeah, and tvnerdgirl - I mean, I've seen my dad in glasses and out of glasses (though not in tights and a cape thank God)
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