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And suddenly, in that moment, nothing mattered anymore. She sagged, sobbing in his arms, felt the soothing motion of him rubbing her back. She clung to him, her lifeline. Her father in so many ways.
She was finally home. Now I like where we are headed and I am sooooo glad Perry is back in the game.  Great job, more soon! ~Lois Lane Wanna Be
"Live with intention.
Walk to the edge.
Listen Hard.
Practice wellness.
Play with abandon.
Laugh.
Choose with no regret.
Continue to learn.
Appreciate your friends.
Do what you love.
Live as if this is all there is."
~Mary Anne Radmacher
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Hi, Great part.  That's sweet! More ASAP, please. MAF 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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This is such an emotional part! I'm so glad that she has Perry as well now to help her to get away from whatever deamons are after her. Well done! 
I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.
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All I can say is WOW! 
"A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." Chris Reeve
"Whatever comes our way, whatever battle we have raging inside us, we always have a choice. It's the choices that make us who we are, and we can always choose to do what's right." Peter Parker
DON'T DOUBT THE ROUTH
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Yay, Perry's back!  Poor Lois, she's so scared to see Perry again, scared that he might have forgotten about her. You did a brilliant job describing her feelings of anxiety and unease. 
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I wish I had time to go into great detail about what I liked, but I don't so I'll just give you a thumbs up! Great job!! Irene
I try to take one day at a time, but sometimes several days attack me at once.
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Belated FDK... He probably got the same pleasure out of killing nobodies like herself as her father had with the can of Raid during cockroach season. She shuddered. Oh, good comparison! Love that. His gravelly voice rumbling comfortingly by her ear. "Oh, Lois. Thank God you're alive." Awwww.... that's sweet.  I love this story. Hope we see more Lois-Clark moments in part 19.  Julie:)
Mulder: Imagine if you could come back and take out five people who had caused you to suffer. Who would they be?
Scully: I only get five?
Mulder: I remembered your birthday this year, didn't I, Scully?
(The X-Files)
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I don't have much time (have to finish a ton of homework before tomorrow  ), but I do want you all to know I really, really appreciate all your wonderful comments.  Part 19 up soon. Sara
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