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Hearts United 10/16 - Comments #26129 12/02/05 12:03 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 397 MissyG OP Beat Reporter
OP MissyG Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 397	Ugh!! Pam!! Things are really getting tight!! Kal's in the hands of some pycho-babble Trask goon, Lois can't find Kal and the rock is still on its way!!! Great section!!!! I can't wait for more!! Missy

Re: Hearts United 10/16 - Comments #26130 12/02/05 12:38 PM
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California groobie Kerth
groobie Kerth Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California	I was hoping that would be Lois on the phone, and overhearing her voice would kick Kal into action. Alas, no...still stuck in the hypnotherapist's clutches. Kal - Lois needs you! The planet needs you! Get up off the couch! Susan You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.

Re: Hearts United 10/16 - Comments #26131 12/02/05 01:21 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: Hearts United 10/16 - Comments #26132 12/02/05 03:42 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,791 9 hours from Metropolis Karen Merriwether
Karen Merriwether Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,791 9 hours from Metropolis	Uhoh. Gwen is getting too close for comfort. And Lois not close enough! Great so far! "You need me. You wouldn't be much of a hero without a villain. And you do love being the hero, don't you. The cheering children, the swooning women, you love it so much, it's made you my most reliable accomplice." -- Lex Luthor to Superman, Question Authority, Justice League Unlimited

Re: Hearts United 10/16 - Comments #26133 12/02/05 06:29 PM
Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,441 Likes: 1 Dublin, Ireland Ank. K. S. Top Banana
Ank. K. S. Top Banana Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,441 Likes: 1 Dublin, Ireland	Absolutely loved the word association. (red sun) (yellow costume girl dancing) If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it. Waking a Miracle by Aria

Re: Hearts United 10/16 - Comments #26134 12/03/05 03:23 AM
Joined: Sep 2004 Posts: 1,302 Canada ccmalo Top Banana
ccmalo Top Banana Joined: Sep 2004 Posts: 1,302 Canada	Always love dream sequences in fics. And nice word association stuff too. Quote Slowly, he nodded. "Subterfuge, instead of frontal assault." Smart boy, our Kal. But what I especially liked about this section was your use of dialogue to convey relationships, attitudes, emotions, etc. Well done! my only criticism: where's Bill? ? c

Re: Hearts United 10/16 - Comments #26135 12/03/05 03:48 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	The word sequence was pretty funny actually. Good job. Poor Kal! Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: Hearts United 10/16 - Comments #26136 12/03/05 04:08 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel Kerth
daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Ohh, Gwen is getting closer! Jose "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: Hearts United 10/16 - Comments #26137 12/03/05 09:54 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Pam I'm sorry I haven't commented on every section. I've been so busy with work and dancing. This is excellent. Tricia

Re: Hearts United 10/16 - Comments #26138 12/05/05 07:37 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet... Mister Data Pulitzer
Mister Data Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet...	I just love this story! And now I have to share a funny thing as I was glancing over this the first time. I missed the word green and a few other things the first time and so it totally changed the following...(glossing is soooo dangerous sometimes!!!) And since I thought that Kal was uncertain at this point, I took the question marks at the end of 'Kal's' responses as normal... Here is Pam's work as I thought it read. Quote "We'll start simply," she said. "And work up to the interesting areas." "Blue." "Dog?" "Cat." "Sun?" "Red." "Sports?" "Football." "Dancing?" By this time I was rolling and then I continued. Quote "Girl." "Wife?" Just as I was about to read 'Zara', someone called and distracted me. When my eyes wandered back to the screen, I picked up on the first thing my mind recognized, which was 'flying' and eveything was correct at that point. Quote "Flying?" "Ships." "Tidal wave?" "Harrington." "Authority?" "Obey." When I read the print out later, I picked up on the things I missed and was totally laughing at myself. James “…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26. Also read Nan's Terran Underground!

Re: Hearts United 10/16 - Comments #26139 12/05/05 11:55 AM
Joined: Mar 2004 Posts: 452 Colorado, US sheilah Beat Reporter
sheilah Beat Reporter Joined: Mar 2004 Posts: 452 Colorado, US	Interesting how Kal seemed to revert to his autocratic self. It makes me wonder how much he has changed--or how deep that change goes. Darn. I really should have waited until it was done. I don't think I'm up for close calls with Trask when I have to wait between each post. And BTW, hasn't it been forever since part 10 was posted? Sheila Harper Hopeless fan of a timeless love story http://www.sheilaharper.com/

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