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FDK: Smart Teens-Part 2 #26270 12/04/05 10:22 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. OP Pulitzer
OP mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great piece. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK: Smart Teens-Part 2 #26271 12/04/05 02:22 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Aw I liked the converstation toward the end. This is intersting. More soon. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK: Smart Teens-Part 2 #26272 12/05/05 07:43 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet... Mister Data Pulitzer
Mister Data Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet...	Just started reading this and caught up. Very entertaining and I like the premise. Smart Kids was definitely a throw-a-way episode and the natural progression of the kid's lives afterwords and the non-involvement of the Kents are very realistic. James “…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26. Also read Nan's Terran Underground!

Re: FDK: Smart Teens-Part 2 #26273 12/05/05 10:17 AM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 451 Burbank, California Nicole S Beat Reporter
Nicole S Beat Reporter Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 451 Burbank, California	Susan, I really liked this part!! Especially: Quote “I need your help. I didn’t really know where else to turn.” She gave half a laugh and said, almost to herself, “Funny. There was a time when I could have thought my own way out of this problem.” “Well, I’ve learned over the years that it’s always good to rely on your friends.” Lois put a sympathetic smile on her face. “Yeah, sure. I relied on my friends three years ago and look what happened.” “Hey, it all worked out in the end.” Lois observed the question in Aymee’s face. “How much do you remember from all of that?” “We all remember things.” Aymee glanced at Clark and caught his eyes. “Secrets we probably shouldn’t know.” Lois could almost feel the nervous energy flash through her husband. The subject of the Smart Kids hadn’t come up since Lois had learned about Clark’s other identity; clearly, something had happened between Superman and the children in their shared history. And she knew the one thing that always put him on edge. Great moments there ~NICOLE

Re: FDK: Smart Teens-Part 2 #26274 12/05/05 01:04 PM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370 J Julia Beat Reporter
Julia Beat Reporter J Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370	I just read parts 1 and 2. And even though I never really liked the episode Smart Kids (like pretty much everyone else around here ) I really enjoyed this story. But I really liked the conversation between Lois and Clark at the end of part 2. We can see that Lois has come a great way from the distant woman she'd been three years ago, to the caring and warm woman she is now. Great job ! Looking forward to more, ~Julia

Re: FDK: Smart Teens-Part 2 #26275 12/05/05 11:30 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Susan A great part! Tricia

Re: FDK: Smart Teens-Part 2 #26276 12/06/05 04:47 AM
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California groobie Kerth
groobie Kerth Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California	Thank you all for reading my story! I appreciate your kind words. I hope you enjoy the turn of events in part 3. Susan You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.

Re: FDK: Smart Teens-Part 2 #26277 12/06/05 05:53 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner
LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland	Yikes! Philip and Mindy in cahoots. Not a good combination! Can't help feeling sorry for Philip, though. Poor kid's so mixed up. The differences in Lois's attitudes, then and now, as she perceives them, were interesting. This segment, we got more from Karen, and once again you bring her to life, with some beautiful introspection. And I just loved the whole conversation with Clark and Lois. Everything about your writing flows so naturally - the dialogue, the introspection, the prose. It's a joy to read, Susan, and absolutely fascinating. EDIT: LOL. Just read the other comments. Quote Yikes! Philip and Mindy together can't be good. GMTA, Tricia. LabRat Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly. Aramis: Yes, sorry. Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal. The Musketeers

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