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Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK #26299 12/04/05 09:31 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,161 Sydney Australia C Crazy_Babe OP Kerth
OP Crazy_Babe Kerth C Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,161 Sydney Australia	This is great! Lois is realising what a real catch Clark is! I really love how you are having Lucy really play with Lois' heart. Finish it ASAP The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched they must be felt with the heart Helen Keller

Re: Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK #26300 12/04/05 10:03 PM
Joined: Jul 2005 Posts: 247 Incognito Hack from Nowheresville
Incognito Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Jul 2005 Posts: 247	Lois is particularly cute when she's in denial. g Loved your description of Lois' POV on the doctored picture. sigh Yep, still wanna give Lois a hug. Such wonderful, absorbing writing, Nicole. Can't wait for the next part. Chris "Superman is a guy who's seen wonders we'll never see and Lois is to him, one of those wonders."

Re: Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK #26301 12/04/05 10:16 PM
Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797 T TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner
TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner T Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797	Can I just repeat what Incognito said here? (And hey... why are there no "hug" icons?) Ann

Re: Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK #26302 12/04/05 10:50 PM
Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 101 Tennessee in the Good ole USA Kent28 Hack from Nowheresville
Kent28 Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 101 Tennessee in the Good ole USA	I am enjoying this story...the Lucy character is very believable. And hilarious too. Poor Lois! Please Post more soon! Marcy (Elrond's blessing at the departure of the company from Rivendell) "Farewell, and may the blessing of Elves and Men and all Free Folk go with you. May the stars shine upon your faces!" -Lord of the Rings, J.R.R. Tolkien

Re: Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK #26303 12/04/05 11:31 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 411 España Cristina Beat Reporter
Cristina Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 411 España	Hey! I just caught up with this story, and I must say, I'm really liking it! It's so nice to see Lois suffering for such good reasons (as opposed to the 'I-have-less-than-24-hours-left-to-live kind of suffering ) And Lucy's plans are just so good. I'm really looking forward to the last two parts of this story Cris

Re: Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK #26304 12/04/05 11:35 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 111 Aussie Fearless Monkey Hack from Nowheresville
Fearless Monkey Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 111 Aussie	this story rocks! Can't wait for more Avatar: Michael Clarke, awesome Aussie cricket player

Re: Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK #26305 12/05/05 06:43 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel Kerth
daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Expecting the next part eagerly!! Jose "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK #26306 12/05/05 08:53 AM
Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 199 Belgium AnHa Hack from Nowheresville
AnHa Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 199 Belgium	Really, really looking forward to the next part. And poor Lois, I'm kind of feeling bad for her. I'm also curious about Clark's reaction Greets, ~ An ~

Re: Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK #26307 12/05/05 11:33 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	I actually feel sorry for Lois LOL! Love it. More soon. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK #26308 12/05/05 12:28 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part. Love it. More ASAP, please. MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK #26309 12/05/05 12:52 PM
Joined: Oct 2005 Posts: 378 The very Spanish part of the M... Capes Beat Reporter
Capes Beat Reporter Joined: Oct 2005 Posts: 378 The very Spanish part of the M...	This story just keeps getting better! Quote And… she was calling him “Kent.” Never a good sign. Quote Clark’s eyes… “I saw it.” Awww. Wait until you see he was looking at YOU, Lois. Quote She needs to be hit over the head with the facts, That does seem to be the trend with Lois... Quote “I’ll agree with you there. He has a wonderful smile.” You love him, Lois...we all know it Quote Pretending was bad… Lucy looked at Lois. …Yet that was how she lived her life. Too true. I also liked how you had her writing about Superman and switching to Clark. If that doesn't show who her thoughts are moving to, I don't know what does. Great job. Can't wait for the next part! ~~ Swoosh --->

Re: Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK #26310 12/05/05 02:57 PM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 120 shells Hack from Nowheresville
shells Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 120	Just saw this story for the first time this afternoon & caught up on all three parts. All I can say is: Poor Lois! and Lucy is brilliant! eagerly awaiting the next part! Shells You must be the change you wish to see in the world. - Mahatma Gandhi

Re: Lucy Lane is Coming to Town (3/5) - FDK #26311 12/05/05 07:25 PM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 451 Burbank, California Nicole S Beat Reporter
Nicole S Beat Reporter Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 451 Burbank, California	Hello Thank you guys so much for all your feedback! It means so much to me!! I'm glad so many of you commented about Lois's reaction to the doctored photo... as Incognito pointed out, she is cute when she's in denial and her heart's just being ripped out of her chest and stomped all over... uh.... um.... :rolleyes: ... I mean, it pains me, too, to see her that way... thank goodness there's only 2 more parts Capes wrote: Quote I also liked how you had her writing about Superman and switching to Clark. If that doesn't show who her thoughts are moving to, I don't know what does. Great job. Thank you!! I'm glad you liked that! It definitely shows where her thoughts are at Cristina wrote: Quote It's so nice to see Lois suffering for such good reasons (as opposed to the 'I-have-less-than-24-hours-left-to-live kind of suffering ) Wendy, if you're reading this, do you see how you're affecting everyone? This story gets attention in the feedback for most stories on the board right now!! Speaking of which... when do we get the next part??? Okay, thank you, EVERYONE for the wonderful comments that have made my day!!! Part 4 coming up now!!!!!!!!!!!! ~NICOLE

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