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FDK- Future Perfect 1/? #26605 12/14/05 04:41 AM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada J jackiek OP Merriwether
OP jackiek Merriwether J Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada	Well you've definately got my attention. I can't wait to see what's going on. Great start! Welcome to the board Chriscy! Jackie EDIT: Just changing the header of the post to reflect that Chriscky has now got a title for her story. Yay, Chriscy! <g> Superman: I hear you've been looking for me. Lois: All my life.

Re: FDK- Future Perfect 1/? #26606 12/14/05 04:52 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet... Mister Data Pulitzer
Mister Data Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet...	Definitely looks interesting. I would like to read more. James “…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26. Also read Nan's Terran Underground!

Re: FDK- Future Perfect 1/? #26607 12/14/05 04:58 AM
Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 446 Indiana TicAndToc Beat Reporter
TicAndToc Beat Reporter Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 446 Indiana	Keep going!! I'd like to see what happens, too. ~Toc TicAndToc :o) ------ "I have six locks on my door all in a row. When I go out, I lock every other one. I figure no matter how long somebody stands there picking the locks, they are always locking three." -Elayne Boosler

Re: FDK- Future Perfect 1/? #26608 12/14/05 05:03 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca... Wendymr Pulitzer
Wendymr Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca...	Very interesting beginning, Chriscy! Intriguing and fascinating, and as you can see you already have us demanding more. ) Just a fly-by! waves

Re: FDK- Future Perfect 1/? #26609 12/14/05 07:29 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 484 The near side of the back of b... Krissie Beat Reporter
Krissie Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 484 The near side of the back of b...	Ah, this is going to be a "me too" post. I'd like to see where you take this. The story is looking good so far. Lots of nice hooks to grab the readers attention. Chris

Re: FDK- Future Perfect 1/? #26610 12/14/05 09:38 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great start. I don't know the movie but I like it. You should continue. :rolleyes: I don't like stories with out title so she need a tentative title for now. How about "Lois' Comfort and Joy"? Unless does are the kids name? More ASAP, Please. MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK- Future Perfect 1/? #26611 12/14/05 12:30 PM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370 J Julia Beat Reporter
Julia Beat Reporter J Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370	Very interesting premise.

Re: FDK- Future Perfect 1/? #26612 12/14/05 12:53 PM
Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 271 japan mmprincess Hack from Nowheresville
mmprincess Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 271 japan	Very intriguing! Can't wait to read the story so post again soon!!

Re: FDK- Future Perfect 1/? #26613 12/14/05 03:50 PM
Joined: Jul 2005 Posts: 247 Incognito Hack from Nowheresville
Incognito Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Jul 2005 Posts: 247	Totally intrigued by this, too. Can't wait to see more of Lois' reaction as reality unfolds. More please. Chris "Superman is a guy who's seen wonders we'll never see and Lois is to him, one of those wonders."

Re: FDK- Future Perfect 1/? #26614 12/14/05 08:29 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner
LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland	Okay, so I was updating the TOCs and accidentally got hooked reading the comments. I do that a lot. So, naturally, I had to go read. And...intriguing. Has anyone else mentioned intriguing? Well, I'm going to say intriguing anyway. So there. Because it definitely is! This bit was way too short, of course. <g> That's my only complaint. I like your writing style, you have some lovely prose in there. What else? Oh yeah - more soon, please! LabRat Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly. Aramis: Yes, sorry. Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal. The Musketeers

Re: FDK- Future Perfect 1/? #26615 12/15/05 09:32 AM
Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 103 ChriscyK Hack from Nowheresville
ChriscyK Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 103	I'm a nerdy language student). Anyway, I'm going to post a chapter soon, hopefully before interest runs out, but now I need to go back and edit it to make sure POVs are consistent! Don't want to make that mistake anymore. And I'm really green, so...how long should a chapter be? I didn't think my story was long because it's only 9 pages so far, but I write with a size 10 font and apparently it's already 69Kb. Suggestions would be much appreciated! I'll be right back after some errands and post the next part tonight, I promise! Chriscy

Re: FDK- Future Perfect 1/? #26616 12/15/05 10:07 AM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 451 Burbank, California Nicole S Beat Reporter
Nicole S Beat Reporter Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 451 Burbank, California	Hi Chriscy! I really love this so far! I feel repetitive saying what others have said ( Quote this story officially has a name, and it's called "Future Perfect" ... I LOVE that title! So much layered meaning, really, and just... Perfect Perfect!!!! I am holding you to your promise of a post tonight!!! ~NICOLE

Re: FDK- Future Perfect 1/? #26617 12/15/05 10:59 AM
Joined: Oct 2005 Posts: 378 The very Spanish part of the M... Capes Beat Reporter
Capes Beat Reporter Joined: Oct 2005 Posts: 378 The very Spanish part of the M...	I'll ditto Labrat on this one: intriguing. The end, with her wondering about using her Tae Kwon Do moves was hilarious Looking forward to the next part. ~~ Swoosh --->

Re: FDK- Future Perfect 1/? #26618 12/15/05 01:20 PM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 1,356 Italy S Simona Top Banana
Simona Top Banana S Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 1,356 Italy	very interesting premise! I'm looking forward to read where you're going to go with this particular situation! simona

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