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Hi, chickberry! wave I'm touched that you'd come out of semi-lurker status to let me know you're here and reading. laugh

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I think most reader here gobble up anything you write no matter what side of the boards it's posted on, so you shouldn't be nervous about posting. I know it doesn't work that way and I can't imagine how nerve racking it can be posting on the other side.
No, it doesn't work that way at all. To say it's nerve wracking is an understatement. Even after all these years, I still get jumpy (and sometimes nauseated) when I click the button to post. It's like walking naked into a crowd. You cringe and chew off a few fingernails while you wait for people to start pointing and laughing. And when the answer is silence, geez, it's deafening. I sometimes wonder why the heck I put myself through it. Then someone pops in to leave a comment and it takes the edge off (for a little while).

Thank you for giving me a respite! sloppy


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Clark: Well, just to put your little mind at ease, Lois, you're right.
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Michael - LOL! Now there's an image! Luckily, she still retains just enough awe of Superman not to do a striptease in front of him.
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Bwahahaha! See, that's the kind of comment that keeps me from drinking while reading. wink
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Thanks for catching that!
You’re welcome! I do know just how certain phrases can mean while writing. And then there’s the hoping someone will get a crack out of it smile1

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Only if a) said girlfriend was someone else, and b) if Lois actually answered the phone before she knew who it was.
Well, a) could be a Lois clone or a spare from another dimension and b) she *is* noise and sometimes impetuous, so if *could* happen.
LOIS: A spare?
CANON LOIS: wave Wait, what now?

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Miss Congeniality!
So *that’s* where I heard that one. Thanks!

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Before this story is over, there might be a lot of things he'll never wash again.
jawdrop How hobos are born.

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Even odds is better than the usual odds on her staying put.
Yeah, it’s like with the casino, betting on color is the safest bet you can make, and yet, you still only get 18 out of 37.

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Nah, that's already been done, and much better than I could write it. (see Caroline K's 'If I Were You')
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Sure, that'll work. <snorfle>
You don’t sound convinced.
LOIS: Ya think? mad

/off to #6!/
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I loved this part! I got everything that I asked for and enjoyed it as much as I thought I would.

Superman's visit to Lex Towers was tense. Clark really is out of his league when dealing with criminal masterminds. He probably should not have gone. I wonder if Lex will back off on the fires now that he's threatened Superman directly? In any case, Superman needs someone - a partner of sorts - to help him find and take care of the Kryptonite. Hey, I know! He should tell Lois. laugh

I love you for giving me the bedtime phone call. Thank you so much! Best part --
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It was pretty ironic that the distance Luthor had put between them was actually loosening the boundaries of their friendship. Lois was a lot more flirty when she thought he was thousands of miles away.
Ha! Called it!

Yes, she's much more flirty. It's fun to see Lois trying to guess who Clark's love interest is. I hope that she let's it slip soon that whomever it is, she hates her and is jealous. Clark needs that kind of encouragement to tell Lois that he loves her.

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Even across thousands of miles of phone line she could hear Clark swallow. Lois smiled, feeling a little feminine pride that Clark might be trying to imagine what she was wearing right now.

"Which phone are you using?" Clark's voice had dropped to a husky rumble and the low pitch of it reverberated through her as if a tuning fork had just been struck.

"Which phone?" she repeated. She couldn't quite parse the question when her brain was still occupied with noticing just how sexy Clark's voice could be.

"The one in the living room? Or in the bedroom?"

"Um, bedroom," she whispered.

She could practically hear his grin, even before he spoke, still using that low tone that was really starting to do something for her. "Are you in my bed?"

"Maybe," she allowed somewhat coquettishly.

"Under the covers?"

"Does it matter?"

"I guess that depends on what you're wearing."

"Nothing but boxers," she said with a giggle. "I hear they're all the rage in nighttime attire this year."

She heard him draw in a quick breath then release it slowly. "Superman was right. That is going to prey upon my imagination."
Sorry to quote so much, but I just love this exchange so much. I aspire to be able to write witty banter like this. And UST. I love Lois and Clark UST. Thanks for that!

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You capture Lex perfectly. He’s perfectly calm and totally creepy. Their phone conversations are so great. . Love how the distance between them is enabling Lois to let her guard down with him even more. Clark can’t stop thinking of Lois wearing nothing but his boxers in his apartment. Are you trying to kill the poor guy? goofy

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Michael - I'm shocked to see that it's been over two years and I never replied. Forgive me? grovel FWIW, your comments always crack me up. It's like MST3000 for fic. smile

Brenda - So pleased that you got everything you asked for!
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Superman's visit to Lex Towers was tense. Clark really is out of his league when dealing with criminal masterminds. He probably should not have gone.
Yeah, he probably shouldn't have gone. But Clark doesn't always think clearly when it involves Lois.
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Ha! Called it!
Yes, you certainly did! laugh
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I hope that she let's it slip soon that whomever it is, she hates her and is jealous.
She doesn't really let it slip, but she sure isn't very good at hiding it. lol
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Sorry to quote so much, but I just love this exchange so much. I aspire to be able to write witty banter like this. And UST. I love Lois and Clark UST.
First of all, allow me to present Master of Disguise and it's epilogue Wanna Neck as proof that you absolutely do write witty banter and UST. Also, thanks! That kind of praise goes straight to my head. blush

Jackie - Lex was always perfectly calm and creepy so I'm delighted that I managed to capture that for you.
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Clark can’t stop thinking of Lois wearing nothing but his boxers in his apartment. Are you trying to kill the poor guy?
Kill him? Never! But I sometimes enjoy teasing him a bit. thumbsup

Thank you all! sloppy


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Clark: Well, just to put your little mind at ease, Lois, you're right.
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The fact that he could only resist Lois for short periods of time was a secret Clark guarded nearly as closely as Superman's identity. He had done his best to get out of his apartment before Lois could tempt him into staying longer. Flirting with her was one thing but seeing his normally unflappable partner vulnerable and teary-eyed brought out every protective instinct he possessed.
Very good point to highlight here. It makes his reactions as Superman much more realistic, and helps show just how *Clark* he is, even when he's trying so hard to stay in-character as Superman.

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trying unsuccessfully to stop himself from wondering if Lois had put on that t-shirt yet. Was she sitting on his couch, watching television? Was she on his bed and reading a book? Even better, was she stretched out across his bed again and whispering his name? Or maybe she was walking around barelegged in his apartment at this very moment. He could picture her opening the fridge or walking along his bookshelves, her head tipped back as she browsed through the titles on the highest shelf. Would she go on tiptoe to pull one down for a closer look? He could perfectly imagine the taut line of her legs and how the shirt would rise as she lifted her arms. How much of her legs did it reveal? If he was there would he catch a glimpse of her panties?
I was going to start this out as teasing, but this got incrementally hotter as his mental list went on. *fans self* He was one stray thought away from a rating bump. drool

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or a body that made desire well up in him like a spring

/naughty giggles/

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She could have Superman; he just had to be willing to take the deception that far.
shock Wow. That t-shirt idea must have done a number on him if he's halfway down that mental path already. Whoa, Clarkie. Slow your roll. I think he'd combust on the spot if Lois had said she'd sleep in her underwear haha.

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He couldn't do it. Not now. Not tonight. Not when the rest of her world was crumbling around her.
There he is! Brains triumphs over... uh...

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Clark had the momentary satisfaction of seeing both Luthor and Mrs. Cox slack-jawed in astonishment. A few seconds later their expressions simultaneously shifted to masks of pleasant indifference.
Love, love, LOVE this bit. This whole scene, actually. This whole chapter, actually, but Clark's actions and Luthor's reaction were so perfectly on point that I don't even have the words. Besides all the words you just read.

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"Please be careful, Superman," Luthor called out. "It would be tragic if anything should happen to you."
*shudders* Burn in hell, Mr. Luthor!
OFF-SCREEN: she never says that

laugh No? No to the "What About Bob" reference? *shrugs* No big deal. Moving on.

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Equal parts irritation and embarrassment coursed through her as she lifted the receiver. "He told you? Superman told you I was here? He promised me he wouldn't tell you!"

There was a short pause and then Clark cleared his throat. "I doubt he promised you that."

Haha, busted. goofy I might have to ask the court reporter to read me back the previous chapter, but he at the very least came close to promising that.

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"You do realize that, so far, you've lived a pretty fulfilling life without knowing either one of those things. Why does it matter who I'm in love with or what Superman wears to bed?"

For the sake of not just copying and pasting the whole chapter into quotes, I just selected this line, but this entire section was absolute perfection. Their banter is precise, and so very clearly in their own voices. I love that he tells her Superman sleeps in his boxers, even though he could have made up anything (in particular something unattractive... like Superman sleeps in a cocoon of his own goo).

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"He stopped by earlier when I was picking out my pajamas. But he made me promise never to tell you. I guess he thought it would prey upon your imagination."
In a chapter full of great lines, I love this line the most. laugh Also, Clark can't say it hasn't been preying on his imagination (see above).

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"Which phone are you using?"

lol Sneaky, Clark. Very, very sneaky.

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He couldn't think of any other explanation for finding her on his bed earlier tonight, whispering his name in that dreamy, wistful way. Her reaction at being caught had certainly made it seem less than innocent. Not to mention the way she'd said good night to him.
Yep, lots to prey on the imagination, Kent. devil Big Blue should not have told you all that stuff. Oh wait...

GREAT chapter! Will jump into FDK for 6 tomorrow!


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