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Hi Sue!
I swear, I haven’t /mutters about what it is that keeps some FoLCs accusing me of hacking their PCs and grabbing advance copies of the stories/

Wait, isn’t that the plot from The Wizard of Oz?

Drat! But then again, given what happens in part 7, it sure makes sense why she had to already be dressed in her work clothes and then get them all dirty

So, it’s just a rumor, then, that’s going around the printing press? What about the limerick they printed last weekend on how the famous reporter and the famous entrepreneur…

Michael

Then you must be psychic.

Only if someone is lacking courage, too. Jimmy, maybe?

Well, it's not illicit because that's where Clark wants her and I'm sure he'd be glad to know that she's feeling sensual because of being there. Now, if she'd just change into the boxers and wait for Clark to come home, we'd be in business.

Hey, I can hope, can't I?

I love how you circled back to the moon. It's really sweet and will be romantic as soon as she knows about Superman. Then he can take her flying in the moonlight.

And rotflol! I love how the irony of her feeling like he wasn't far away and then changing scene to Superman huddling outside the front door. Nice transition!

Poor Superman. First Kryptonite, then a cut from broken glass. Lois really is a caring individual. She really can be patient.

Bwah ha ha!

I've started to wonder what is going to tip Lois off to Clark's dual identity. Now that she's spending so much time at Clark's apartment and wearing his clothes, surely she's going to notice that Clark and Superman smell the same. Or his Kryptonite-addled brain is going let something slip, like when he was mumbling sweet nothings about liking it when Lois touched him.

And a bombing. Of course there's a bombing. We need Perry back right away. This time, Lois can help the other four investigate and gather evidence. Can't wait!

Aww I love how Lois can’t stop thinking about Clark. We’re getting there! So sweet how Superman doesn’t want Lois to leave him and how she takes care of him. While I absolutely loved the scenes between Lois and Superman in this story, I was worried their flirting would reenforce Lois’ crush on him instead of concentrating on her new feelings for Clark. Glad that isn’t the case and Lois can’t seem to get Clark off her mind.

Oh, interesting new twist!!!!
I'm going on for more!!
r/
Artemis

Brenda - Ha! Having her wait in boxers for him to come home could make a great n-epilogue.


Yeah, moonlight does factor in again later.


Thanks!


She has her moments. When it's someone she cares about, she can be extremely patient.


It's probably going to be a cumulation of all those little things that tip her off. Or maybe he works up the courage to tell her…


Of course Lois will let others investigate while she does nothing! That's how she rolls!

Jackie - It's the fact that she can't stop thinking about Clark (and being jealous of his "girlfriend") that finally makes her realize she thinks of him as much more than a colleague or a friend.


He doesn't want her to leave because he knows that Lex is looking for her.


It's human nature to want what we can't have. Lois thinks she can't have Clark, and that's happening just as she's realizing how much he really means to her. She's already acknowledged to herself that her crush on Superman was unrealistic and that she (thinks) she doesn't really know him. But Clark? She knows Clark and she knows what she thinks she's losing.

Artemis - So glad you're back!

Thank you all for the comments! You're wonderful!

They are definitely getting all worked up for nothing. Well, hopefully not for *nothing* nothing... Between Lois' bedroom thoughts and Clark's panties thoughts they're definitely preying on each other's imaginations. UST must become resolved soon!

I love seeing Lois' little imagery of them. First of all, it's adorable that she can picture a moment like that. But most of all, I love to see how Lois really does believe Superman is his own person, even in "off hours" so to speak. So much crap gets tossed her way for not seeing what's right in front of her, but little things like this really pack a punch as to why the deception works. She has no reason to believe otherwise.

Ding, ding, ding! We have a winner! All Clark needs is to see a little less flirt towards Superman and a little more flirting towards Clark, and then his kisses won't be quite so far off.

Uh-oh! At least he didn't attempt to go in.


Awwww.

Double awww. Poor delirious little Clark. Trying to make up for waking Clark's sins. Love that Lois appeases him, but he's so genuine in his apologies. Go back to sleep, Superman.


There's those investigative instincts! Let her at 'im, Clark, let her at 'im! She'll bring Luthor down a couple pegs when she's in reporter mode.

Uh-oh! Lex is already gonna bring down the Planet?!

Another great chapter! On to 7!