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Ghost From the Past Feedback Folder All comments go here Hope everyone is ready for a bumpy ride. Part 21 is up. Before anyone says anything "Yes, I realize Lois is coming off as a bit bitchy but it's necessary to portray her emotions."
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Part 21:Yup, I'm still following and enjoying this story. I think you've portrayed Lois very well, and her emotions are real and in character. She's entitled to be a bit testy due to her life experiences, especially the last five years. 
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"A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly
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Part 21:Yup, I'm still following and enjoying this story. I think you've portrayed Lois very well, and her emotions are real and in character. She's entitled to be a bit testy due to her life experiences, especially the last five years. Hi Cuidadora! Glad you're still with me!  Yes, poor Lois has been through a lot. I just noticed there seemed to be a shift in the air on the boards this past week with a lot of Lois bashing so I wanted to make it clear it was done on purpose. B/T losing Clark for five years, Jamie, and struggling to fight for herself and earn the respect of her colleagues she's had a lot on her plate. I'm probably just going to finish this one first before finishing up Epiphany. My muse finally came back to visit so I'm letting it run around to its heart's content. I know where I want it to go. I'm just trying to figure out how to get it there. :P
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Agreed. She is a little on the testy side in this story. Yikes!
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A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.
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Agreed. She is a little on the testy side in this story. Yikes! Ha! Yeah, she's being 'testy' to put it lightly.  Poor Clark. Don't worry I don't plan on torturing him for too long.   I should have the next part up soon.
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Part 22 is up. 
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Part 23 is up. Lots of action going on here. Let me know what you think.
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What a roller coaster in Part 23. Wow! As I read it, I realized only Clark could survive five years of torture and heal so quickly. Even though he thinks Superman is just what he does, he IS Superman in so many ways. 
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"Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor
"A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly
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What a roller coaster in Part 23. Wow! As I read it, I realized only Clark could survive five years of torture and heal so quickly. Even though he thinks Superman is just what he does, he IS Superman in so many ways. Hi cuidadora!  Thanks for commenting. I wasn't sure if anyone was still reading the new stories right now. Wasn't sure if I should wait to post part 24. Yes, Clark IS Superman even when he doesn't want to be. It's more than just a costume but rather how he handles everything day to day. He's come through a lot and he still has quite a bit to get through but he is making great strides compared to how anyone else in that situation would be. There's still a lot of twists and turns to get to the happy ending though. 
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Part 24 is up. Flashbacks start back here. Hope its not too confusing. 
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I like the fact that Lois and Clark found Platt before he could die from electrocution. Clark seriously needs to be Superman, though!
"Oh, you can’t help that," said the Cat: "we’re all mad here. I’m mad. You’re mad."
"How do you know I’m mad?" said Alice.
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I like the fact that Lois and Clark found Platt before he could die from electrocution. Clark seriously needs to be Superman, though! Yes, I wanted Dr. Platt to be saved. Part 25 is up. It jumps around a bit. I hope everyone can keep up.
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Let me know what you think. Here's the latest chapter 26
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Part 27 is up. The end is here. Isn't that crazy?
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Catching up with this story. You're doing a great job of weaving your multiple plot lines into canon situations and making them your own and believable. While I'm looking forward to the next installment, I'm in no rush to see this story end!
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Catching up with this story. You're doing a great job of weaving your multiple plot lines into canon situations and making them your own and believable. While I'm looking forward to the next installment, I'm in no rush to see this story end! Thanks cuidadora. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I've finished writing it. Just trying to allow enough time for everyone to catch up and edit everything. I'm sad to see it end but at the same time, it's a bit of a relief. This story had been swimming around in my head since 2010. 
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Part 28 is up. Let me know what you think. I believe 30 is the right number but we will see.
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Whoops! Forgot to post. Part 29 is up. The next part will be up probably this weekend if I have time or if I get nagged enough whichever comes first. Yes everything question will be answered. Yes there will be a REAL wedding in the next part. Hope you enjoyed the ride. I did put everyone back in one piece for the most part. Anyway, let me know what you think.
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Part 30 is here. Um, I decided to do the wedding in the Epilogue. Otherwise this part would have been too long. Hope you enjoy.
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Final Part of Ghost From the Past is up. I hope you enjoy the wedding. Let me know what you think. I'll probably start work on Mad World once we get through the Kerths. Sorry. For those still following Epiphany .... Yes, I will start writing the next parts in the next week Keep a look out near the end of the week.
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