Wow loislane the story is getting better by the minute i was like S@#$% i can't wait until you put it in the achives.
Thanks lovesuper, sometimes writing this felt like S@#$% but it is nice to see that in a possitive contex
Cliffhanger! It was nice of Clark to reveal his secret to Lois rather than just leaving her in her tears, but that means he's not around to control her reaction.
Ah what will it drive a woman in love to do?
Saaaweeeeeeeeeet revelation!!! Unique and QUITE enjoyable!!
Thanks Nicole!
Oh no you did not just leave us hanging here! That was cruel and this is a great story. My God, that letter had me needing kleenex.
Thank you so much! Sorry I got ya choked up but I am glad to hear you are liking it
Like Nicole said.... What a revelation! Wow! Unique, that's right. Has Clark ever revealed his secret to Lois this way before? Don't think so, and yet it seems like such an obvious thing to do. To prove beyond a doubt why he has to go when he has to go, that it's never because he is running away from her, and that he really trusts her.
I am glad Ann you enjoyed it. Actually I really don't know if Clark in other stories has told Lois like this before. I think I wrote it this way because I was always upset he never just said it and he always let everything else get in the way. Ah love, but hey it makes for a great story
Lois and Clark's emotions are superbly portrayed. I love the revelation. So spontaneous and original!
Thats soooo awesome to hear! Thank you for reading!
WHAT CLIFFHANGER! GET BACK HERE!
No problem Roo, off to post part three now before the mob comes after me
Again thanks for the comments and for those who read and don't comment, I know you are there and thank you
~Lois Lane Wanna Be