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Chapter 5 - Wow, Clark is seriously angry. Too funny that Lois finds it easier to contact Superman than Clark. Chapter 6 - My head is spinning with how fast things occurred! Wow! Amazing how quickly Clark and Lois reconciled once they both talked or yelled at each other. Nice they can see each other's point of view... finally!  Ah, the A-plot comes back. A-plot Interruptus?  Look forward to seeing both how you resolve this differently than the show and if there's THE Revelation.
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"Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor
"A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly
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Chapter 5 - Wow, Clark is seriously angry. Too funny that Lois finds it easier to contact Superman than Clark. Chapter 6 - My head is spinning with how fast things occurred! Wow! Amazing how quickly Clark and Lois reconciled once they both talked or yelled at each other. Nice they can see each other's point of view... finally! Ah, the A-plot comes back. A-plot Interruptus? Look forward to seeing both how you resolve this differently than the show and if there's THE Revelation. Hi cuidadora! Thanks for reading and commenting. Yes, after all that fighting the making up had to be steamy  All that pent up frustration with one another has to come out somewhere right? Hope you enjoyed the ending. 
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Hope you enjoyed the ending. Loved it!!
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"Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor
"A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly
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Of course Clark shouldn't have gone to Lois' apartment after the dance! It only confused her that much more. How is the poor girl to get a grip on her relationship with Clark when he keeps stirring up confusion?
Ready to dive into this adventure!
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Of course Clark shouldn't have gone to Lois' apartment after the dance! It only confused her that much more. How is the poor girl to get a grip on her relationship with Clark when he keeps stirring up confusion?
Ready to dive into this adventure! Hi Morgana, Yeah, it was quite a twisty web Clark wove himself by dancing with her as Superman and Clark in one night. Have fun reading!
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Hope you enjoyed the ending. Loved it!! Glad you enjoyed it. 
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Finally got caught up on this one! Now I'm sad that there isn't any more.  What happens when Clark tells Lois the secret? What happens to Mayson in this timeline? Did Lois and Clark ever pick up where they left off with their smooching? So many questions! I need answers!
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Finally got caught up on this one! Now I'm sad that there isn't any more. What happens when Clark tells Lois the secret? What happens to Mayson in this timeline? Did Lois and Clark ever pick up where they left off with their smooching? So many questions! I need answers! I'm toying with a Sequel to this one...
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Finally got caught up on this one! Now I'm sad that there isn't any more. What happens when Clark tells Lois the secret? What happens to Mayson in this timeline? Did Lois and Clark ever pick up where they left off with their smooching? So many questions! I need answers! I'm toying with a Sequel to this one... Yay! 
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"Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor
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Part one
Lois, that man is only interested in you, not some bubble head named Candi!
How do you expect to learn more about Ryan if you don't re-connect with Molly? The woman is hiding something.
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Part one
Lois, that man is only interested in you, not some bubble head named Candi!
How do you expect to learn more about Ryan if you don't re-connect with Molly? The woman is hiding something. LOL Morgana! It's like Candi with an 'i' not a 'y' haha Hope you're enjoying the fic.
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Part Three I am having a blast with this! Ryan kidnaps Molly. Clark interfereswith Lois stakeout, so now Molly is in his clutches. But wait, there is more. Clark confronts Lois about her helping him get a social life! Unfortunately, before it gets good Mayson shows up!  This ain't your typical day at the office!
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Part Four
I really feel sorry for Mayson, she got the short end of that lunch. Poor girl had to pay for both of them.
Lois. Clark. Having a full fledged fight in front of the newsroom staff is a big no-no. Perry has a good point; this is no place to fight. Go out there and track down that strange lead, there is a paper to be set up!
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Part Five
Yeah Lois, an uncomfortable conversation between you and a certain reporter is about to take place. Ouch.
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Part Eight
Enjoyed this story bunches! Much better than original.
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Really liked the story. Made me want to go back to the real episode and rewatch it. If only I had the time to really do that.  I think you portrayed Lois and Clark well. It's nice to see Angry!Clark every once in a while. Thanks for sharing.
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Sorry that I didn't take the time to comment on your story when I read it last month, but RL was crazy busy!  Totally loved your story, but was disappointed that there was no revelation until you let us know that you were doing a sequel !
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Sorry that I didn't take the time to comment on your story when I read it last month, but RL was crazy busy! Totally loved your story, but was disappointed that there was no revelation until you let us know that you were doing a sequel ! RL has been a killer for everyone I think. Thanks for taking the time to comment. Yeah, I wasn't sure what the name of the sequel was going to be then the more I thought about it the more it kinda morphed into a monster of it's own. This will be known as the 'Rules' series. I'm not rewriting EVERY episode of Season 2 but I'm selecting some of my favorites and rewriting them into this timeline and having some fun with them. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and hope you have time to catch up on Rules of Trust. Chapter 3 is going up here in a few.
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Really liked the story. Made me want to go back to the real episode and rewatch it. If only I had the time to really do that. sad
I think you portrayed Lois and Clark well. It's nice to see Angry!Clark every once in a while.
Thanks for sharing. Hi Bakasi! Glad you enjoyed this one. Yeah, Clark is allowed to get angry every once in awhile. Lois definitely pushed him there in this one. Part Eight
Enjoyed this story bunches! Much better than original. Hi Morgana! Glad you enjoyed this one. It's kinda taken on a life of it's own now. lol
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RL got in the way so I just today got around to reading the tale. Downloaded it to my kindle from the archive.
Delightful, I loved the way you developed their relationship and the growth in Lois Lane. Great fun.
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