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show me some L&C love people ;-)
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Nice job tying up the hows of Clark getting out of the marriage to Zara. I can't tell, will this be a multi-part story?
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it will be a multi-part story
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It was a little confusing at first, but I figured it out. As Mike said, this was the perfect way for Clark to get out of his marriage to Zara.
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It was a little confusing at first, but I figured it out. As Mike said, this was the perfect way for Clark to get out of his marriage to Zara. they are still married though but only like a politic solution like he called it in the series. But the story isn't done yet there will be more surprises lol
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So who is this messenger and why can't he just deliver the message to Clark on Earth?
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So who is this messenger and why can't he just deliver the message to Clark on Earth? you will find out soon enough 
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All caught up! Interesting that they put the kryptonite there on purpose as protection. These little snippets are too small for me  . I need more. Can't wait to see what happens when they get to New Krypton. Will anything happen on the way?? (Your chapter 7 link (here and TOC) is broken).
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I am just too eager to post lol. I will look into it. Thanks for reviewing
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What an interesting arrangement they have. I sure hope Zara and Ching figure things out. Too bad their kryptonian ways are just in the way.
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What an interesting arrangement they have. I sure hope Zara and Ching figure things out. Too bad their kryptonian ways are just in the way. That is for my muse to know and for me to follow 
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Sigh, poor Ching. I'm glad Clark is Clark, and I'm sure Ching and Zara are too.
I wonder if New Krypton will ever change.
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They didn’t know what the consequences would be after making love without his superman powers but Lois didn’t care. Some foreshadowing?? Will there be consequences?? Oh my! I agree with Blue. It's a good thing for Ching that Clark is so upfront about things. Maybe Ching can learn something by watching him.
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