I really love this. Superman being vulnerable, but not in a bad way, and needing help from his friends. I liked the tone throughout the story. I don't know how to describe it, but I liked it. I really like Clark being able to learn about Krypton and even remember some things, like his parents. They seem so distant and relatively unimportant to who Clark is in most cases, and they aren't here.
I think the chimes were a great touch. Like, you were calling it kryptonite, but at the same time giving evidence it wasn't bad. I remember bring a little anxious for Clark my first read through. But at the same time very intrigued by what the chiming meant.
I liked the pace of the story. How it unfolded and Clark incrementally remembered. Starting with the sunset and it's beauty, and kind of climaxing with Lois holding him as he remembered the destruction, his mother's words and the flight. It was just right.