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Summary: Act II of AU series, Investigate. With Luthor's empire in shambles, another quickly moves in to take its place. However, they didn't account for Kent, not to mention Superman's direct approach. Private Investigator & prior military Kent. More assertive and proactive Superman.

Again, thanks to Morgana, Chereche, and Mary who helped beta this fic and/or acted as soundboards ^_^. And thanks to those on FOLC's Skype group who helped me clarify ideas.

Reading Investigate is strongly recommended. It can be found here: Investigate

If you're already caught up or just want to skip to begin reading the 2nd Act, here is chapter 1: Return

Also note, Act II takes place in the second season of canon, although I've taken the liberty of adjusting things accordingly, as this is an AU.
I hope you all enjoy ^_^

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Being one of the betas on this story was such a treat!


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Hi,

Some family stuff going on at the moment that I won't go into here, but we could use some prayers if any of you pray. My posts will likely be few and far between for a while, but I'm still around.

Anyway, here is the next part: Chapter 2

Hope you all enjoy. smile

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I'm delighted to see you continuing this series. The premise is so intriguing. Also I like how even though she may not agree with everything he does, Mayson isn't hostile to Superman like she was in the show. I enjoyed your version of Superman's contact with Martin Snell.

I'm sorry about your family stuff. Family comes first, and the boards will be here whenever you're ready to post.


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Originally Posted by cuidadora
I'm delighted to see you continuing this series. The premise is so intriguing. Also I like how even though she may not agree with everything he does, Mayson isn't hostile to Superman like she was in the show. I enjoyed your version of Superman's contact with Martin Snell.

I'm sorry about your family stuff. Family comes first, and the boards will be here whenever you're ready to post.

Thanks. A new routine is starting this week for my family and the air seems breathable again.

Anyway, glad you like my approach with Mayson. It seemed to me the biggest issue she had with Superman was there not being any official decision on giving him authority to help emergency responders and no rules in place with legal affairs. With those things set, I think she would more easily be able to view him as an ally.

Well, next part is now up: Part 3: Mr. Church

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Happy to see this third story!! The others were so incredible and hope all lis well with you.

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Hi Blueowl,

I just managed to catch up on your story. I'm glad that Lois has finally met Clark without his disguise. I'm wondering how the two will get along. For the time being, poor Clark seems out of commission after his encounter with the sound weapon. I don't think I've ever seen that one used in a fic. But then, Wall of Sound is one of the largely underrepresented episodes within this fandom.

Eagerly waiting for more


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Originally Posted by L
Happy to see this third story!! The others were so incredible and hope all lis well with you.
Thanks L ^_^, and yeah, as good as they can be. My family is entering a new routine and we've received a number of answered prayers, so we're good.

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Hi Blueowl,

I just managed to catch up on your story. I'm glad that Lois has finally met Clark without his disguise. I'm wondering how the two will get along. For the time being, poor Clark seems out of commission after his encounter with the sound weapon. I don't think I've ever seen that one used in a fic. But then, Wall of Sound is one of the largely underrepresented episodes within this fandom.

Eagerly waiting for more
Glad you caught up laugh And Wall of Sound is admittedly one of my favorite episodes. I often wondered why the government hadn't tried to use it on the bad Kryptonians....

Anyway! Next part is up: Structure

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Thank you for another great chapter. I like your Dr. Klein. And it's definitely interesting that Clark already thinks about telling Lois his secret. He seems to be less of a lunkhead than canon Clark. I like the changes and I'm curious where you are taking this


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Originally Posted by bakasi
Thank you for another great chapter. I like your Dr. Klein. And it's definitely interesting that Clark already thinks about telling Lois his secret. He seems to be less of a lunkhead than canon Clark. I like the changes and I'm curious where you are taking this

Thanks ^_^. I feel what he has experienced has matured him a bit more than canon-Clark. As for Klein, whenever I can use him, I try to. Such a great character.

Anyway, here is part 5: Friends?

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Thank you for another great chapter. I'm already looking forward to Lois and Clark meeting some more.


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Originally Posted by bakasi
Thank you for another great chapter. I'm already looking forward to Lois and Clark meeting some more.
Thanks smile
Next part is up -- Unseen

Fic now has 8 parts, because I had originally miscounted somehow.
Hope you all enjoy ^_^

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Yay, he is actually going to tell her his secret. I'm eagerly waiting for the next part.

When you blinded Clark in this part, I thought that he'd perhaps stay with Lois and he would tell her in the privacy of her apartment. But I like that he invited her to his place. I'm curious how she will react to the knowledge.


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Thanks bakasi and L.

Yes, Clark's going to do it! Hope you all like the approach and fallout. Part 7--Identity

Anyway, hope everyone is doing okay. It's been very quiet lately.

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Lois took it well. But then he didn't lie to her for more than a year. Certainly helped. I'm looking forward to their relationship developing.


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Originally Posted by bakasi
Lois took it well. But then he didn't lie to her for more than a year. Certainly helped. I'm looking forward to their relationship developing.
Thanks ^_^

Well, here is the last part to this Act: Date
Hope you all enjoy the ending.

I'm about half way through writing Act 3 ^_^

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Blueowl.

Thanks for giving us such a wonderfully different version of Superman's life! clap


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Well, this story has certainly less drama about it than the series. Not sure how I feel about that in the relationship department. When Clark told Lois about his plans for the future that reminded me a bit of my hubby's proposal. Very romantic- not.

But I loved their conversation about his expectations regarding intimacy.

Can't wait to read the full version of Act III


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