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FDK: Inaction #289518 08/08/21 11:41 PM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 3,072 Likes: 24 Florida Queen of the Capes OP Pulitzer
OP Queen of the Capes Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 3,072 Likes: 24 Florida	Story: https://www.lcficmbs.com/ubb/ubbthreads.php/topics/289517#Post289517 Comments? ~•~

Re: FDK: Inaction Queen of the Capes #289519 08/09/21 10:51 AM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,147 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer
Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,147 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	Ow. Remorseless. Almost cruel. Almost suicidal. Not doing something right can be as tragic as doing something wrong. Painful but deep. Great job. Kerth. Last edited by Terry Leatherwood; 08/09/21 02:07 PM. Reason: add Kerth Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

Re: FDK: Inaction Queen of the Capes #289526 08/09/21 06:51 PM
Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 1,011 Likes: 21 Central/Eastern USA Blueowl Top Banana
Blueowl Top Banana Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 1,011 Likes: 21 Central/Eastern USA	*Sniffle Dang. Talk about getting shot in the heart. Very good short.

Re: FDK: Inaction Queen of the Capes #289533 08/10/21 07:19 AM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 3,072 Likes: 24 Florida Queen of the Capes OP Pulitzer
OP Queen of the Capes Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 3,072 Likes: 24 Florida	Thanks, guys! ^_^ It was written late at night; I wanted to see if I could do a story without verbs. ~•~

Re: FDK: Inaction Queen of the Capes #289534 08/10/21 01:49 PM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,147 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer
Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,147 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	Quote It was written late at night; I wanted to see if I could do a story without verbs. Silly me. I was so taken by the beauty of what was there that I neglected to see - or, rather, not see - what wasn't there. You have excelled in non-verbal communication, Mary. I doff my metaphorical hat to you. Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

Re: FDK: Inaction Queen of the Capes #289553 08/14/21 10:57 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,831 Likes: 42 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,831 Likes: 42 Somewhere on the East Coast	My friend, you always push the limits! Bobbart would be so proud of you! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Inaction Queen of the Capes #292668 08/07/22 05:52 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,085 Likes: 39 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,085 Likes: 39	Hi Mary! No verbs. Huh. I didn’t realize it either. Mind went to haiku instead. From the structure it is quite clear she would have liked to do something against Clark getting shot. Her inaction caused his death. Of course what could she have done? The stakato of thoughts is wonderfully delivered. It feels like she has these thoughts flashing through her mind in the span of a moment or two. Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

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