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FDK : "A Cut Above The Rest" 1/2 #29079 04/12/06 12:56 PM
Joined: Mar 2006 Posts: 94 Hershey, Pa FinLi OP Freelance Reporter
OP FinLi Freelance Reporter Joined: Mar 2006 Posts: 94 Hershey, Pa	Congrats on your first story(well, first half anyway.) It was great! The banter between Lois and Clark is just like the show. I could really "see" the whole scene in the Daily Planet. You describe it really well. I especially loved this part. Quote "Morning, Clark." "Morning, Lois," he replied bending over her and handing her a cup of coffee. He gave her a light lingering kiss on the cheek that sent playful little feelings all through her. "It had cooled off a little bit since you hadn't gotten here yet, but I warmed it up for you," he said emphasizing what he had done by tipping his glasses down on his nose slightly. It's sooo sweet I can't wait to read more. FinLi Clark: "Can I have a rat chief? Can I, huh? Please?" Perry: "Clark, do you want me to send you to the dark room?" Clark: "The dark room?"

Re: FDK : "A Cut Above The Rest" 1/2 #29080 04/12/06 01:13 PM
Joined: Mar 2006 Posts: 2,667 The block around the corner fr... Matrix Pulitzer
Matrix Pulitzer Joined: Mar 2006 Posts: 2,667 The block around the corner fr...	Thanks FinLi. After watching the Kerths and reading everyone else's stories, I just had to try writing a fanfic. It looked like so much fun. I'm glad someone liked it. I've finished my editing and revisions and the second half is posted now. Smile and the world smiles with you ... frown and you're just giving yourself wrinkles.

Re: FDK : "A Cut Above The Rest" 1/2 #29081 04/12/06 01:38 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,380 Likes: 1 The Lone Star State Nan Kerth
Nan Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,380 Likes: 1 The Lone Star State	I see you got your nerve together to post the story. <g> It's a good story, and your agitated Lois is certainly in fine form. I think you did a good job with it. Nan Earth is the insane asylum for the universe.

Re: FDK : "A Cut Above The Rest" 1/2 #29082 04/12/06 04:01 PM
Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 101 Tennessee in the Good ole USA Kent28 Hack from Nowheresville
Kent28 Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 101 Tennessee in the Good ole USA	Great job! I thought this was a totally believable explanation for why Lois got the cut! Loved it! Marcy (Elrond's blessing at the departure of the company from Rivendell) "Farewell, and may the blessing of Elves and Men and all Free Folk go with you. May the stars shine upon your faces!" -Lord of the Rings, J.R.R. Tolkien

Re: FDK : "A Cut Above The Rest" 1/2 #29083 04/12/06 04:19 PM
Joined: Mar 2006 Posts: 2,667 The block around the corner fr... Matrix Pulitzer
Matrix Pulitzer Joined: Mar 2006 Posts: 2,667 The block around the corner fr...	Hi Nan! Oh that makes me mad. I was so concerned with how to post my story that I forgot to thank my two beta readers for their hard work and helping me with my story. That's it. I'm going back to edit my post so I can put that in there. Many many thanks to Nan and Suz for their hard work in reading my story, providing their insights, and helping me. Sorry I didn't put that in my original post. You guys were great! And thank you to Marcy! I'm glad you liked it. That makes it all worth writing, if it is enjoyed. Smile and the world smiles with you ... frown and you're just giving yourself wrinkles.

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